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|Subject: A slenderblog in progress. Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:48 pm|| |
My attempt at a blog.
Maybe it does follow the tired old "teenager starts a blog and gets haunted by Slenderman" thing, but I'd like to hope I'll be able to bring some different details into it. The action's just getting started now.
I'm totally willing to listen to any con-crit anyone might have, on my writing style, plot, character development, etc, heck even my blog layout. At the moment I'm trying to make it seem like a regular blog, to build up some sense of character and maybe even foreshadowing. I'm just a little worried that in the meantime it's getting a little too wordy without bringing the real action (meaning Slendy) to the table.
But again, I'd really like to hear what anyone has to say about this.
Last edited by BananaBrains on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:27 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Updating the info a bit)