Entry #8 (3D porn schematics) - Finally, some almost pornographic content. I was feeling frustrated too.
Entry #9 - The "Crafty wank." That's all there is to say, really.
Entry #10 (token entry of running around with flashli- I mean, "torch") - I managed to smile.
Entry #11 (second encounter, nothing "exciting") - The narration at the end was funny enough.
Entry #12 ("man" in field) - Visual tear again... got it.
Entry #13 (campfire ashes; panther in building at the very end) - Operator symbol... can't say it was unexpected, but they could have made its use... well, funny. Like, use crossing dildos or something.
Entry #14 (sneak in door; "blood on face" parody) - Was quite good.
Entry #15 (interview with Jim. Oh, I get it now) - Was all right. Like how matter-of-factly they deliver the last few lines.
Entry #16 (the star and the "house") - A Mario star. That's... out of place.
Entry #17 (recitation of lines with Jim) - WHY ARE YOU WEARING A JACKET??? itsprettyco'in'ere. Also, was that... motion... with the Panther necessary?
Entry #18 (pink-shirt Masky attack) - Okay, the "hard on" line really got me.
Entry #19 (Masky's invasion) - The sex jokes are getting old.
Entry #19.5 (items review) - The Post-Its were kinda funny.
Entry #20 ("Script Revisions" - Jim's sick) - I sorta like the rewritten Hornets lines. These guys are obviously big fans of MH.
Entyr #21 (The Tower) - The written narration is the only thing holding the humor together here.
Entry #22 ([name]... is gone [other name]... is gone) - The script being in front of the actors on the laptop might have been unintentional in #20, but in this one, it's pretty obvious and funny.
Entry #23 (back to the house) - Oh, it WAS the Pink Panther.
Entry #24 (Couldn't have left the room) - Boring.
Entry ######## (yew... are de-ark!) - So... they're Scottish, maybe? I'm not good with Great Britain accents.
Entry #25 (making fire) - ZOMG A GURL LOLOLOL WTF.
Entry #26 (The End... ? No.) - The dialogue was pretty funny. Not much else to say, except I don't really understand why that guy ran out the door.
CONSENSUS: These guys can be funny. They've proven it time and time again with their various unapologetic perverted twists on the MarbleHornets story. But they could use some refining. I know I'll sound like a hypocritical dick for this (considering MBB's first several videos), but guys, please, drop Windows Movie Maker. You look old enough to have a means of making enough money to buy something a bit more sophisticated. They've obviously worked harder at their series than we have, though, since in the span of only five months they've redone more than half of MH, though it looks like they've taken a break after 26, though I doubt it'll be seven months. Their style of humor is clearly just silly, perverted, fun takes on each and every MH entry, and while that can be funny, it certainly wears on you. My opinion of them is probably lessened by the fact that I've just chugged through most of their videos in one sitting, which wears on one's mind (as I'm sure many of you know). Nevertheless, I have subscribed to them and I hope to see more, preferably with some improvement in the timing, the budget, and the release dates (seriously, spreading yourself a bit thin isn't bad when you want your series to last a bit longer). I'm sure that many people find the low budget/terrible editing to be part of the humor, and maybe it's just my whiny anal retentiveness speaking here, but that stuff just bugs me.
Save me K.B. from ruining my precious time watching this. Does it really start to suck and get old?
I watched the first two and thats all I had time for.
Maybe you'll be able to enjoy it better than me, but I think it got old after a bit. They never start to "suck," really, but the perverse shtick doesn't evolve to accommodate the long running time.
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Subject: Re: Granite Moths Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:55 pm
They've started posting again! They're up to entry 40 now and they've moved off porn, i think the new theme is wildlife documentaries...i just found their ToTheArk channel aswell - ToTheRC some of the new stuff has way better editing, totally subscribed ^^