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PostSubject: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 5:01 pm

Hi there! A few of my friends and I have been working on this series for about two months now... So far it's mostly backstory and the usual Slender Man occurrences, but we have plans... oh yes.

It starts off as one girl's twitter and video blog about going to a new college, but clearly, something more is happening. Then when her best friend gets pulled in, things go wrong.

Anyway, we're hoping for some feedback, we all know that things are a bit slow and rough so far, but we're hoping to pick up the pace and get some real story going here!

where it begins: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

Also, the Youtube channel: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]


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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 6:32 pm

It is always rough getting started. It is a time when you must find your bearings and see what people respond to and what people dislike. I have a few suggestions. It is okay to have some long winded episodes, but several in a row is enough to cause a viewer, especially one who starts off in the wrong place, to disregard your series. People disregard series more easily now then ever before because of the abundant selection. Next I would suggest that you be careful when holding the cam. It is rough on the viewer when you whip the camera around in a casual setting. In such a setting there is no real reason to do so unless you really need to do it to serve a purpose. The pay off, well this is a personal preference. I do not know how others feel about this, but I hate suggested things that the holder did not catch on cam when the camera was on and they were right there. The same can be said for fill in the blank distortion. There is no payoff in these things and it makes me feel cheated. One thing that I have noticed about your series is that I can tell when you are trying to lead a conversation somewhere and when you are just talking. The acting is apparent in contrast to your natural dialog. I know acting sucks. I am not good at it, but you should find a better median between your two aspects of speak. I hope this helps. I cant wait to see what happens when your series picks up some steam.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 6:45 pm

Thanks for the advice! I really hope (and believe) we can smooth this stuff out when we get to actual storyline. I'll pass everything along to the others! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyWed Jan 04, 2012 4:11 am

Oooh, another new series to get in to?! Awesome! I'll have to start watching ASAP!
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyThu Jan 05, 2012 6:29 pm

We just posted a new video, Searching for Answers.

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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Jan 06, 2012 8:26 am

It's getting pretty interesting! Normally I like a bit of buildup but I like how you just kind of hop right into the fray of things. I hope you don't mind, I commented IC from my own non slendy but still creepy vlog. My character's sort of "genre aware" so he knows who Slenderman is...so I had him mention him. If you don't want me to say anything like that, I can always remove it. Looking forward to see where you go with this!
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Jan 06, 2012 4:54 pm

There's some good ideas, used here. The knitting project, for example, is a very interesting and unique idea to add to the mythos and I liked the use of the crawlspace too, it was a nice bit of added creepy.

If I have to complain (And I always have to complain) I would say the acting is less good in some parts than it is in others, but that's a problem that can be surmounted by doing more takes. As well as that, I would very much advise making costumes for your antagonists and finding somebody to wear them rather than editing them in.
But yeah, definitely shows some promise. Like I said, you have interesting ideas and brought in something new and original which I have to admire you for.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySat Jan 07, 2012 7:12 am

Oh yeah and one suggestion, if you use that crawlspace again, is to make sure to film it! Lots of people have claustrophobia (which you think would be a fear of Santa) and even if they don't, it just adds some good creepyness.

Yeah the acting could be better but I can't say anything given my acting in my own series, lol. I don't want to criticize because I know my own stuff is pretty bad Razz. But I like the series so far and I'm interested to where you're gonna take it.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyThu Jan 12, 2012 7:13 pm

New Video, Clover manages to get in contact with a friend of Clara's

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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Jan 13, 2012 7:12 am

Oooh awesome! Also I subbed you, even though I thought I did beforehand. Looking forward to more!
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySun Jan 22, 2012 11:05 am

Hi again! New video up, thought I'd share.

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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySun Jan 22, 2012 5:03 pm

I keep forgetting to watch this! I saw it on my subs list and I haven't had the time. I'll try to get to it soon!

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Pretty cool video! However, I had trouble hearing your dad and had to turn up the volume on my speakers. It's not really that bad now but just don't do that if you're going to have ear splitting distortion, cause that'd be REALLY loud, lol. Over all, cool video. I'm wondering if your imaginary friend is going to play more of a part in the series, or if it's just a mention. BTW, the story I told you in the youtube comment is true, lol. I was a strange kid Razz
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyMon Feb 13, 2012 2:20 am

Well, just a quick update, since it's been a while.

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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyTue Apr 24, 2012 7:41 am

Looks like a Zalgofied Clover appeared in One Bad Dream's [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] alongside Victor from mydarkjournal and Violet from TU5
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri May 04, 2012 8:00 pm

Rumor has it Clover's popping in OBD's livestream tonight.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyMon Jul 02, 2012 7:45 am

NEW VIDEO!!!!!

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This is part 1 of 2 of why I left Chicago so quickly. The more shit that went down, the more I had to just go. But...

WHY
can't I remember. WHY am I so confused. WHY doesn't anything make
sense. And WHY do I keep thinking of myself by my middle name, Ann. WHY
is this happening. It's not fair
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Oct 19, 2012 5:49 am

A wild new videohas appeard:


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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Oct 19, 2012 12:52 pm

Spoiler:
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Oct 19, 2012 12:57 pm

mayaxpapaya wrote:
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awww that makes me kind of sad Sad
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyTue Oct 23, 2012 12:52 pm

TailsFoxy wrote:
mayaxpapaya wrote:
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awww that makes me kind of sad Sad

Yknow, I've always had trouble catching up to new series that I discover because they are always constantly updating, so in between keeping up to date with other Slendervlogs that I follow, I have trouble keeping up with the one I discovered.

Now with this one, since it's finished, I don't have to worry about that. Saying that, I'll be catching up with this one quickly. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Jun 13, 2014 7:44 pm

So she is back (or not? o.O )

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Please don't send me spam or nonsense, I'm actually looking for some answers here. I do intend to explain more later but I'd like to get a feel for who's actually watching this first.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyFri Jun 13, 2014 10:07 pm

I really like this revival/second season/arc approach. Gonna watch.
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySat Jun 28, 2014 5:29 pm

And here is the new video:
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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptyTue Jul 01, 2014 10:41 pm

Communications:

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PostSubject: Re: CloverinChicago   CloverinChicago EmptySat Aug 02, 2014 6:37 pm

Just posted earlier today-

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