so i watched the video and these are my thoughts
1. you based this off of the slender game, and MarbleHornets which massively
drops the originality
of your video
2. you jumped into the slendery bits of the story FAR FAR
to early. and introduction video would've been nice to at least explain the initial reason
for this channel existence.
3. the channel name. far to many people these days think they can just up and make a slender arg without any planning, thought, or even creativity
. by making the name
of your channel "ObliviousVictim" your viewers already know that you are aware of what did,is, or will happen to you. they know you are a so called "Victim". another reason that this was horrible is because once any viewer goes to watch one of your videos, they know its going to be or is meant to be scary, which drops the oh so important element of surprise
4. i can see that your meaning for this to be a found footage channel, probably leading to merge with the current times, but you can't have the found footage be "found" by the main character. that just dropped a possible whole chapter of the plot
, and the over all quality of the plot because as i said before, the viewers know you know what happened.
5. one of the things that pissed me off the most was the ridiculous amount of excess audio. my fucking
god, the audio was annoying as hell
. at times it would've been appropriate, but not the whole fucking
time. and the random music bits??? i know the audio was meant to give the viewers and enhanced scary
experience, but man it was too annoying
to try paying attention to for it to scare me, and trust me, o scare easily
now that ive written this whole review of your whole video, you had better
come back and read it.