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TheSomnambulist
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| Subject: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness  Mon Dec 03, 2012 9:36 pm | |
| Hello. So yeah a few of you in The Mythos may have seen this blog already. It's about a girl named Lisa Sile who having met The Slender Man as a child decides to hunt him down before he comes back for her. As expected things do not go as planned but the way things go down are hopefully a bit more unexpected than normal. The blog will be ending in a couple of days. 9 actually so I figured I might as well get it out there now. The URL: http://farewelltoheavenmyfriend.blogspot.com/Enjoy feel free to ask questions or give comments. | |
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The Slenderfreak
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Tue Dec 04, 2012 3:51 pm | |
| "One of his tentacles reached out and brushed my head and then he was gone.
He was so fucking awesome"
what. the. hell.
I have to read this now.
more critique as I progress further.
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TheSomnambulist
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:16 pm | |
| If you thought that was weird you're head is going to explode by the time the story ends.
I look forward to your critique
Oh wow... Probably should have actually finished reading Gargoyle's blog... Well the plot point can't be changed now so just gonna have to take my word for it there was no purposeful connection...
Between The Third in Gargoyles blog and The Third who will be mentioned in this one...
It is merely a continuation of The First, Second, etc... naming convention.
I actually probably have nothing to worry about on this but I just have this odd thing about accidentally copying other people... I'm not even doing that here it's just the same name but still I feel the need to clarify that...
Well...
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SoulEatingBunny
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:12 am | |
| I really like this Blog, it's a shame you are ending it. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I like it so far. - Spoiler:
And having Slenderman protect the main character is a bit... interesting. In a good way.
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TheSomnambulist
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Thu Dec 06, 2012 12:22 am | |
| Thank you.
Sadly I set an end date near the very beginning of the blog so it has to come to an end now.
Also yeah I thought that aspect would be very interesting and from what I've seen so far pretty unique. | |
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TheSomnambulist
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Wed Dec 12, 2012 5:22 pm | |
| And Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness has officially ended. | |
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SeanPony
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Fri Dec 14, 2012 3:40 am | |
| So yeah, I read your blog last night in it's entirety and I actually really liked it! I'll put the reasons why in a spoiler. - Spoiler:
When I first realised there was a bit of a "love story" if you can call it that, I thought it was a breath of fresh air since it was something I have never seen before so I liked the originality. Really, the entire thing is original and interesting. Slender man protecting Lisa, the proxy building and pretty much all of the story was original and well written. Oh also Lisa had me at "He was so fucking awesome"
I have just one question though... - Spoiler:
At the end of the blog, Lisa is told to bring her laptop to the path, so we know HOW she wrote the blog post but WHEN is what I wanna know. I have this image of Slender man reaching his hand out and Lisa's all "just give me a second" slumps at a tree and starts to write the entry while he's standing there like an idiot XD
In all though great blog and even though I only read it in a night, I wish it wasn't over just yet but I guess it wouldn't make sense to not end it. p.s I'm a newbie so hello!  | |
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TheSomnambulist
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:39 pm | |
| Actually your second spoiler is pretty much exactly what happened... Slendy's a patient guy. He stood there giving her time to make her decision and she wrote the post up in that time.
Anyways thank you I'm glad you liked it. | |
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Zeak
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:47 pm | |
| Ooooooooohhh...another blog I can sink my teeth into.
Love it.
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TheSomnambulist
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| | Subject: Re: Sing To Me Songs of the Darkness Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:56 pm | |
| Thank you.
I'm glad you like it. | |
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