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PostSubject: Critique/Comments?   Sat Nov 10, 2012 1:30 pm

New blog I've been debating if I should write or not. A more...fantastic perspective on dear old Slendy. So far a lot of just simple character-creating posts (I hope. I'm not sure if her personality is showing yet, but I'll work on it) with one odd appearance that I haven't decided if it's SM or not yet. Wanting to do a bit of a slow buildup, I don't like the whole "Oh, there's a guy. Look, he's back the next day." I've always liked it more randomized, unexpected. Sort of how a real stalker works, takes some time to notice it's the same freaking guy.

Critique, comments before I go 'live' with it in a week or so?


I've done ARGs, but nothing SM-related before, I can take critique on any front. Character, pacing, mythos, whatever.
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PostSubject: Re: Critique/Comments?   Sat Nov 10, 2012 1:55 pm

I'd like to be able to read a bit more before offering comments. So far, it's interesting, though not my usual speed.
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