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Nedark
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PostSubject: The Hunt17   Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:08 am

So, my two buddies and I have been attempting to make a slender series for a while now. After much deliberation, restarting, and general SNAFU's, we bring you "TheHunt17" and would greatly appreciate feedback for it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Hunt17   Wed Dec 12, 2012 7:31 pm

Why is Robert wearing the one ring? Is slenderman Sauron and the plague doctor Gollum or something?

Anyways. The series seems ok. Like, it's not terrible (I've seen and talked to people who have had MUCH, MUCH worse series), but it's not GOOD. Like, I don't expect this to be TribeTwelve (the best, in my own humble opinion), but it's mediocre. The clips aren't edited for our convenience ( i mean, Marble Hornets did that, and Jay's much more involved with actually searching around and stuff, but he knows people are watching. The introduction of the Plague Doctor 'cult'(?) seems like it was ripped from DarkHarvest, but hey, the fear mythos is WIDE open, so, what the hell. I'll let that slide, and besides, it'll give me good reference (ha!) for what I'll be working on...
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PostSubject: Re: The Hunt17   Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:01 am

Alright, what I got from your post is that we need to work on our editing and the Plague Doctors need to be distanced from the cult in DarkHarvest. As for the editing, do you have any suggestions or examples in the series where it could have been edited better? It'll help me get a better idea of how to edit.

As an aside, the ring is actually my grandfather's, and you are not the first to notice the similarity Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Hunt17   Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:40 pm

hi I'm the one WHO SENT YOU THAT MESSAGE ONE YOUTUBE.
sO COULD YOU HELP ME WITH THAT....
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PostSubject: Re: The Hunt17   Sat Dec 15, 2012 11:44 pm

Replied to it with my personal account, hope it helps.
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