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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:36 pm | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:46 pm | |
| The writing so far is great. I'm liking the whole "beating-around-the-bush" feel to it, not really explaining many things in detail and making it look as if it's just crazy babbling.
Keep up the good work. | |
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:48 pm | |
| - sethlapod555 wrote:
- The writing so far is great. I'm liking the whole "beating-around-the-bush" feel to it, not really explaining many things in detail and making it look as if it's just crazy babbling.
Keep up the good work. Thanks I'm thinking of where I can go from here. Kinda probe who slendy is. From him stalking, to the proxies, and the slendy worshiping order, ext. I've already referenced the shadows from the Fear verse. So many direction I could go from here. | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:50 pm | |
| So basically this will sort of the a blog on Slender Man's nature? If that's what you're getting at you're on the right track. | |
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 10:51 pm | |
| - sethlapod555 wrote:
- So basically this will sort of the a blog on Slender Man's nature? If that's what you're getting at you're on the right track.
Basically. Slender man is basically an unbeatable enemy that steals children and those that get in his way. but, it's never really explained why. | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:02 pm | |
| I really hope that wasn't a spoiler.
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Sun Apr 28, 2013 11:03 pm | |
| Could be. Could not be. Your guess is as good as mine. New post MOD EDIT: Double-post merged. ~sethlapod555 | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:11 am | |
| Here's the link to the new post. EDIT: The writing in this is just fantastic; very artistic and dark. It seems that the writer is suffering from some sort of... amnesia? Anxiety? Schizophrenia? Some mix of the three? | |
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:19 pm | |
| - sethlapod555 wrote:
- Here's the link to the new post.
EDIT: The writing in this is just fantastic; very artistic and dark.
It seems that the writer is suffering from some sort of... amnesia? Anxiety? Schizophrenia? Some mix of the three? Basically, think of a mind, then beat it with a hammer. That. Next post going out tonight. New post This one's a doozy. MOD EDIT: Please try not to double-post. ~sethlapod555 | |
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thexlastxdalek Watched
Posts : 247 Current Win Points : 91 Join date : 2013-04-07 Age : 27 Location : Behind You.
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 6:31 am | |
| Omg the writing is so sinister and cool | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 7:33 am | |
| Here's the next post: http://everythingivebecome.wordpress.com/2013/05/01/where/EDIT: Wow that was great. I got creeped out even though I'm in my classroom with all of the lights on and kids around me. - Spoiler:
The Bleeding Tree seems to be introduced into this, so I wonder how big of a role it will play in this story. I think this also counts as a Fear Blog now.
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 8:31 am | |
| - projectbigfoot1 wrote:
- Omg the writing is so sinister and cool
Thanks - sethlapod555 wrote:
- Here's the next post: http://everythingivebecome.wordpress.com/2013/05/01/where/
EDIT: Wow that was great. I got creeped out even though I'm in my classroom with all of the lights on and kids around me.
- Spoiler:
The Bleeding Tree seems to be introduced into this, so I wonder how big of a role it will play in this story. I think this also counts as a Fear Blog now.
Well, it already had the Nightlanders. | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 9:22 am | |
| It did? Wow, I didn't even notice. | |
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 6:30 pm | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 10:35 pm | |
| This was an interesting entry. It seems that the writer has no idea how to process the people around them, other than calling them "extensions", which I don't quite understand yet. | |
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 01, 2013 10:49 pm | |
| - sethlapod555 wrote:
- This was an interesting entry. It seems that the writer has no idea how to process the people around them, other than calling them "extensions", which I don't quite understand yet.
Think about it a little harder. You'll figure it out. | |
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thexlastxdalek Watched
Posts : 247 Current Win Points : 91 Join date : 2013-04-07 Age : 27 Location : Behind You.
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Thu May 02, 2013 10:39 am | |
| - Outlander wrote:
- sethlapod555 wrote:
- This was an interesting entry. It seems that the writer has no idea how to process the people around them, other than calling them "extensions", which I don't quite understand yet.
Think about it a little harder. You'll figure it out. The Fear Mythos is in it I must Read more.! | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Thu May 02, 2013 12:13 pm | |
| I really can't wait for a new entry. I'm really getting into this. | |
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DaLadybugMan Blackout
Posts : 563 Current Win Points : 488 Join date : 2010-12-28 Age : 32 Location : Now I am everywhere
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Thu May 02, 2013 10:24 pm | |
| - Outlander wrote:
- sethlapod555 wrote:
- This was an interesting entry. It seems that the writer has no idea how to process the people around them, other than calling them "extensions", which I don't quite understand yet.
Think about it a little harder. You'll figure it out. Well obviously it's because - Spoiler:
the protagonist is the Slender Man.
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Thu May 02, 2013 11:27 pm | |
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timeobserver2013 Taken
Posts : 445 Current Win Points : 113 Join date : 2013-03-03 Age : 26 Location : ???
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Thu May 02, 2013 11:56 pm | |
| Fucking disturbing yet beautifully poetic. Definitely gonna follow this. | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Fri May 03, 2013 6:15 am | |
| Jesus Christ these get better every entry. As for the entry, I would have to say that - Spoiler:
"a new shadow will appear" refers to a servant of the protagonist if the protagonist really is Slender Man.
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Outlander Anxious
Posts : 74 Current Win Points : 6 Join date : 2012-11-01 Age : 25 Location : The Desert
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Fri May 03, 2013 10:58 am | |
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sethlapod555 Survivor
Posts : 1844 Current Win Points : 708 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 27 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 08, 2013 2:11 pm | |
| Jesus that was devilishly poetic.
I think a new character is going to come into play soon. | |
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Etreo Runner
Posts : 959 Current Win Points : 261 Join date : 2012-10-27 Age : 26 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Everything I've Become Wed May 08, 2013 2:54 pm | |
| This thread title sounds like the title of a Linkin Park song. I'll give your stuff a read as soon as I get the chance. | |
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