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PostSubject: Eating All the Atoms   Mon Apr 29, 2013 5:14 pm

I happened to run across this one today, I like its tense feeling.

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PostSubject: Re: Eating All the Atoms   Fri May 03, 2013 11:38 am

It's not bad for a start, I wouldn't exactly call it tense just yet, the entries are a bit too short for my taste, I wouldn't either call it an original story but we could see more for now. Also, it feels kind of... Idk, too light? I'll continue reading it, anyway, might prove to be awesome, might just be bad. Not a bad start, anyway.
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