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PostSubject: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 10:16 am

Hey guys,
My name is Ivan, I'm new and I live in Bosnia & Hertzegowina. In my blog I'll be using a sort of a pseudonym: Ethan Green
I started a blog, so could you check it out and tell me how you like it?

darkleaves.blogspot.com

Thank you in advance, just post your thoughts of it here.

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 10:21 am

Cokespray wrote:
Hey guys,
I started a blog, so could you check it out and tell me how you like it?

darkleaves.blogspot.com

Thank you in advance, just post your thoughts of it here.


Hey there good to see you on slendernation.

before you post this its best to introduce yourself because i see this is your first post

Have a nice Day Cool
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 1:37 pm

Hey there, Cokespray! Making a thread for our own work as your first post isn't generally isn't a good idea here, as we have a rule and have had a problem with Plug-N-Runners; people who plug their work and never post again. That's why we have the 7-day link-posting block in place.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 1:48 pm

Don't worry I plan to make myself a constant member. I already started reading some topics to see who's who and stuff. Love your signature, I spazzed out of laughter when I saw it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 1:59 pm

Just to clear this up I wasn't saying that you would plug-n-run, I was just explaining the rule that's all. Very Happy

And thank you! It's been my sig since I joined.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 2:00 pm

Cokespray wrote:
Don't worry I plan to make myself a constant member. I already started reading some topics to see who's who and stuff. Love your signature, I spazzed out of laughter when I saw it Very Happy

Cokespray love your signature xD
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 2:09 pm

thanks, your's is creepy as hell
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 2:15 pm

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thanks, your's is creepy as hell

Oh thank you haha
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 3:08 pm

Guys, any opinions on what I should/shouldn't do? I'm fairly new with blogs.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 4:49 pm

I have a few problems to point out.

1. I have no emotional attachment to the character. You gave half of a post to introduce him, and did so quite sloppy.

2. The story. You abandoned subtlety, and dived right in, and I think your story is lesser due to it. It feels rushed and overdone.

3. Character =/= Story. Your character to the story ins't very good. One post he's freaking out, the next he's feeling great? It doesn't make sense, as well as the other characters that have "hacked" your blog.

Honestly, I don't like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 4:51 pm

Thanks for the review, I think I might have rushed it a bit. I don't know if I wipe the blog now or do I continue and attempt to make it better? I personally don't like it at the point. The thing with me is I just can't wait to make the next post. That's why it's too rushed. Come to the slendernation tinychat if you have time: tinychat.com/slendernationtc
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 4:56 pm

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Thanks for the review, I think I might have rushed it a bit. I don't know if I wipe the blog now or do I continue and attempt to make it better? I personally don't like it at the point.

You might just want to scrap it. Aside from rushing it, you haven't brought anything really new to the verse. If you want to do one entry a day, it can work, but it must fit in with the story (like with my blog)
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 4:57 pm

Ok, if you can, come to the tinychat to help me a bit. Wiped the blog. I'm gonna start out different this time.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 4:59 pm

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Ok, if you can, come to the tinychat to help me a bit.

Can't at the moment. If you want my help, message me any questions you have.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri May 03, 2013 5:00 pm

Haven't got any questions in general, just want someone to help me with the plot.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Mon May 13, 2013 5:36 pm

you rang?

I'm all sorts of about plot and stuff even if I don't do any writing currently!

PM me or respond here, I'm always glad to help!
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Wed May 15, 2013 3:47 pm

I decided to leave the blog for summer vacation, as I'm really stressed out since I wake up at 6AM and fall asleep at midnight, it's a bit stressing but I can manage to post here and discuss the plot. My summer vacation starts at 14. the June, but I'll be able to post a week before. Cheers, and if you'd like to help or even collaborate with me, then please PM me or post here! Thanks in advance!
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:17 pm

I'm restarting my blog, so anyone willing to help, please PM me. I renamed it though, you can find the link in my sig.
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:49 am

Is it an Slenderman Blog or.. Because I could help if you want 

ps. i got to much sparetime
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Leaves Blog   Sat Jun 15, 2013 2:05 pm

Yeah, it's a Slendy blog with Fear elements, I planned on adding The Rake, as well as some characters I made up on my own.
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