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PostSubject: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:11 am

High production quality and excellent equipment set this series apart from most all. Shot using a canon DSLR with a RODE vidmic pro stereo, and also excellent quality glass. Edited in adobe premiere pro cs6.  not an "omg slenderman in your face" series. subtlety and plot development = main driving forces. no terrible cutout pillow sheets or easily dissectible costumes. This series aims for quality and effectiveness. all constructive feedback is of course welcome as are compliments. we are just getting started. here is the introduction





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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:14 am

Man...

just...

man....
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:14 am

Really enjoying so far guys! I have caught up now and I am excited for more. Only criticism I would give is that I would like to get to know the protagonist a little more. I am not gonna care if he goes crazy if I don't even know the guy! Either way I am digging it!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:36 am

MrCreepyPasta wrote:
Man...

just...

man....

 good thing or no?
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:41 am

xcitadelx wrote:
MrCreepyPasta wrote:
Man...

just...

man....

 good thing or no?

 Haha IKR Pasta explain yourself!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:44 am

I kinda have to put my critic galsses on *puts on simon cowells glasses* wait..he doesn't wear glasses..LOL

I suppose Audio would be needed (in my opinion) to make a good slender series and..saying that its a slender series in the desc just..ruined it

sorry put the glasses have spoken!

*facepalms*
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:50 am

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I kinda have to put my critic galsses on *puts on simon cowells glasses* wait..he doesn't wear glasses..LOL

I suppose Audio would be needed (in my opinion) to make a good slender series and..saying that its a slender series in the desc just..ruined it

sorry put the glasses have spoken!

*facepalms*

it was my impression that trailheads were to be completely OOC and thus labeling it as a "slender series" wouldnt matter because that was the protcol? obviously I wouldn't label my series as anything as I completely agree that it  ruins the mystique and the "what is it" factor.
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 12:53 am

Hm..damn..Sion really needs glasses huh?..

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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 1:01 am

MrCreepyPasta wrote:
I kinda have to put my critic galsses on *puts on simon cowells glasses* wait..he doesn't wear glasses..LOL

I suppose Audio would be needed (in my opinion) to make a good slender series and..saying that its a slender series in the desc just..ruined it

sorry put the glasses have spoken!

*facepalms*

 upon further inspection this to me is trolling fail. you suppose audio "in your opinion" would be needed to make a good slender series.. but WHAT is the criticism about the audio? you simply say "well i suppose it would be needed" and then launch into another criticism without explaining the first! Am I to believe that you are attempting to discredit me for stating what my gear is? lolol
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 03, 2013 1:09 am

Yeah..see he was meaning everything 9without a good explanation..don't take it for real though probasbly him dicking around LOLLOL
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:53 am

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Yeah..see he was meaning everything 9without a good explanation..don't take it for real though probasbly him dicking around LOLLOL

oh ok now what your saying makes complete sense! I feel much better now knowing that your PATHETIC anime kid troll attempt was completely shut down.
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:16 am

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Yeah..see he was meaning everything 9without a good explanation..don't take it for real though probasbly him dicking around LOLLOL

oh ok now what your saying makes complete sense! I feel much better now knowing that your PATHETIC anime kid troll attempt was completely shut down.

 I have no idea what's going on here..... I still like the show. =)
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:51 am

LOLNO..

I still find this shity as fuck....

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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:52 am

.....wow James that was kinda rude.... I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS (go on skype)
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:52 am

IT IS DAMN SHITTY THOUGH!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:55 am

...dude.......that's really mean... I still like you series man! Keep up the videos and don't let James the bummer over here let you down!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:56 am

but..but..but..fuck!

I'm sorry but the cliché's are SHIT

and the 'bro bro bro bro thing is FUCKING

ARGRGRGRGRGGARGGARGGAGGGARG
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Thu Aug 08, 2013 11:58 pm

xcitadelx wrote:
MrCreepyPasta wrote:
Yeah..see he was meaning everything 9without a good explanation..don't take it for real though probasbly him dicking around LOLLOL
oh ok now what your saying makes complete sense! I feel much better now knowing that your PATHETIC anime kid troll attempt was completely shut down.
Alright guys. Whatever is going on here, please settle it in the Flamewars subforum or in private messaging, since I can't really tell what's going on here.

ON THE ORIGINAL TOPIC, this looks pretty good. Audio isn't necessarily needed in every part of a series. Several Marble Hornets entries are completely silent. And plus the Slender Man Mythos is extremely flexible, so almost anything can go.
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Sat Aug 10, 2013 11:57 am

Looks good so far.  If I could offer one area of improvement, it would be this:  I can't see a freaking thing! A couple times in the videos where we're supposed to see Slendy or some other important plot piece, it's pretty much been all black for me. 

I'm looking forward to seeing how this series develops, though!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 5:44 pm

Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 6:18 pm

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Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
Shadow, this is your official warning. Do not simply state that a series is awful. If you have some advice to give, give it. Otherwise, don't just insult them.


You've been warned, do it again, and you and I will be speaking privately, understood?

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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 6:46 pm

The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
Shadow, this is your official warning. Do not simply state that a series is awful. If you have some advice to give, give it. Otherwise, don't just insult them.


You've been warned, do it again, and you and I will be speaking privately, understood?

-The Doctor
What the hell Doc! I have only said good things about this show and gave great criticism! Especially as someone who is an encourager of new series this makes no sense! I said that it has been AWFUL QUITE LATELY. Not as in the show is BAD but as in it hasn't updated in a while and I want to find out if it is done! Doc, you gotta look at what I am saying a little more clearly... I would never say anything like that EVER! Look back at the past two pages of this thread! All it is, is CrookedFamily saying how horrible this series is and ME defending it!
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 6:52 pm

ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
Shadow, this is your official warning. Do not simply state that a series is awful. If you have some advice to give, give it. Otherwise, don't just insult them.


You've been warned, do it again, and you and I will be speaking privately, understood?

-The Doctor
What the hell Doc! I have only said good things about this show and gave great criticism! Especially as someone who is an encourager of new series this makes no sense! I said that it has been AWFUL QUITE LATELY. Not as in the show is BAD but as in it hasn't updated in a while and I want to find out if it is done! Doc, you gotta look at what I am saying a little more clearly... I would never say anything like that EVER! Look back at the past two pages of this thread! All it is, is CrookedFamily saying how horrible this series is and ME defending it!
Okay, well simply stating that this series has been awful quite lately seems to me like you're insulting them. I will deal with CrookedFamily, but you need to not say stuff like that, I don't care what your past track record is with this series or any series for that matter. Do not do it again. End of discussion. If you have an issue, message me either here or on skype.
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:24 pm

The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
Shadow, this is your official warning. Do not simply state that a series is awful. If you have some advice to give, give it. Otherwise, don't just insult them.


You've been warned, do it again, and you and I will be speaking privately, understood?

-The Doctor
What the hell Doc! I have only said good things about this show and gave great criticism! Especially as someone who is an encourager of new series this makes no sense! I said that it has been AWFUL QUITE LATELY. Not as in the show is BAD but as in it hasn't updated in a while and I want to find out if it is done! Doc, you gotta look at what I am saying a little more clearly... I would never say anything like that EVER! Look back at the past two pages of this thread! All it is, is CrookedFamily saying how horrible this series is and ME defending it!
Okay, well simply stating that this series has been awful quite lately seems to me like you're insulting them. I will deal with CrookedFamily, but you need to not say stuff like that, I don't care what your past track record is with this series or any series for that matter. Do not do it again. End of discussion. If you have an issue, message me either here or on skype.
Whatever you say Doc. ;D
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PostSubject: Re: someonebrokein   Tue Sep 03, 2013 10:28 pm

ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
The Doctor wrote:
ShadowTurtleInc wrote:
Hmmm this series has been awful quite lately....... :I
Shadow, this is your official warning. Do not simply state that a series is awful. If you have some advice to give, give it. Otherwise, don't just insult them.


You've been warned, do it again, and you and I will be speaking privately, understood?

-The Doctor
What the hell Doc! I have only said good things about this show and gave great criticism! Especially as someone who is an encourager of new series this makes no sense! I said that it has been AWFUL QUITE LATELY. Not as in the show is BAD but as in it hasn't updated in a while and I want to find out if it is done! Doc, you gotta look at what I am saying a little more clearly... I would never say anything like that EVER! Look back at the past two pages of this thread! All it is, is CrookedFamily saying how horrible this series is and ME defending it!
Okay, well simply stating that this series has been awful quite lately seems to me like you're insulting them. I will deal with CrookedFamily, but you need to not say stuff like that, I don't care what your past track record is with this series or any series for that matter. Do not do it again. End of discussion. If you have an issue, message me either here or on skype.
Whatever you say Doc. ;D
Do you mean "quiet"? I think you might've made a typo. If you mean it's actually awful, you should explain why and be polite about it (unlike CrookedFamily). I've only seen the first few entries myself so I can't really give my opinion on it yet, but I plan to be watching more of this series soon. I'll give my own reaction to it once I do.
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