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ShadowTurtleInc Turned
Posts : 686 Current Win Points : 306 Join date : 2013-06-12 Location : Lavender Town
| Subject: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sat Aug 31, 2013 9:16 pm | |
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thisistheend Observer
Posts : 106 Current Win Points : 50 Join date : 2013-03-19 Age : 26 Location : Places... just places...
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sat Aug 31, 2013 11:25 pm | |
| Well shit. - Spoiler:
I guess this means that the briefcase is going to be opened in the next video.
Also - Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
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level100nidoking Stalked
Posts : 362 Current Win Points : 66 Join date : 2011-12-20 Age : 25 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sat Aug 31, 2013 11:59 pm | |
| - thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
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He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
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Dr. Squirtle Watched
Posts : 289 Current Win Points : 119 Join date : 2012-02-08 Age : 26 Location : The Mountains of Madness
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:01 am | |
| 10:32, holy shit... - Spoiler:
Damn it, I was certain Sarah was Cursor.
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thisistheend Observer
Posts : 106 Current Win Points : 50 Join date : 2013-03-19 Age : 26 Location : Places... just places...
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:05 am | |
| - level100nidoking wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
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He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
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Honestly, why the hell does this seem more likely than Photoshop?
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Dr. Squirtle Watched
Posts : 289 Current Win Points : 119 Join date : 2012-02-08 Age : 26 Location : The Mountains of Madness
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:21 am | |
| - thisistheend wrote:
- level100nidoking wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
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He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
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Honestly, why the hell does this seem more likely than Photoshop?
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It's not photoshop, he just used fake blood. Very realistic though.
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SecretPerson Anxious
Posts : 55 Current Win Points : 27 Join date : 2013-08-03 Age : 24 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 3:46 am | |
| Oh my god, that was so sad and exiting | |
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level100nidoking Stalked
Posts : 362 Current Win Points : 66 Join date : 2011-12-20 Age : 25 Location : Florida
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 7:42 am | |
| I'm surprised nobody's posted it yet, but heres all the pictures that pop up. 0:26 - Spoiler:
end picture - Spoiler:
I might have missed one, but I don't know if I did. | |
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BlueMarble Stalked
Posts : 371 Current Win Points : 149 Join date : 2013-05-03 Age : 24 Location : The Internet
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 8:57 am | |
| Holy shit.
I've been waiting for this. It's exactly what I wanted. I can't wait for the briefcase opening | |
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thisistheend Observer
Posts : 106 Current Win Points : 50 Join date : 2013-03-19 Age : 26 Location : Places... just places...
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:47 am | |
| - Dr.Squirtle wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- level100nidoking wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
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He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
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Honestly, why the hell does this seem more likely than Photoshop?
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It's not photoshop, he just used fake blood. Very realistic though.
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No, I meant like with the body bag and the car in the lake.
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xyzombie Taken
Posts : 443 Current Win Points : 79 Join date : 2011-11-13 Age : 33 Location : Wooded South-Eastern United States
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:16 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
There are so many things here that could have been better executed. For example, had the phone call come in before he revealed the envelope, it wouldn't have been such an obvious Mary Asher ordeal. And I know my opinion on this is going to get a lot of hate for this, but his acting is still horrid. The hand over the mouth, the facial reactions, the quick shift from concern to "were there symbols?", it's really hard to ever take Noah seriously. Also, did he just surprise himself? Because at one point, he's listing off which of the collective is which - "So mr. scars is probably milo" and then later he's like "wait so milo is alive!?" and it's like - wait, haven't we been discussing that for months and months now, even so much that you allude to it as a piece of common knowledge? The worst part of it is, I know that even posting this will be met with a lot of resistance, not because I'm wrong, but out of some strange urge to be defensive.
The "ding dong" thing was well timed, though. | |
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Dr. Squirtle Watched
Posts : 289 Current Win Points : 119 Join date : 2012-02-08 Age : 26 Location : The Mountains of Madness
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:44 pm | |
| - thisistheend wrote:
- Dr.Squirtle wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- level100nidoking wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
- Spoiler:
He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
- Spoiler:
Honestly, why the hell does this seem more likely than Photoshop?
- Spoiler:
It's not photoshop, he just used fake blood. Very realistic though.
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No, I meant like with the body bag and the car in the lake.
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Those might have been actual newspaper clippings.
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timeobserver2013 Taken
Posts : 445 Current Win Points : 113 Join date : 2013-03-03 Age : 26 Location : ???
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 4:03 pm | |
| - Dr.Squirtle wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Dr.Squirtle wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- level100nidoking wrote:
- thisistheend wrote:
- Immersion Wrecking:
How did he get those pictures OOC?
- Spoiler:
He killed someone and put tape on their eyes.
- Spoiler:
Honestly, why the hell does this seem more likely than Photoshop?
- Spoiler:
It's not photoshop, he just used fake blood. Very realistic though.
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No, I meant like with the body bag and the car in the lake.
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Those might have been actual newspaper clippings.
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Remember Log Entry #28 from Darkharvest?
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Who was that person in the last frame? I've been looking at pics of the character but I'm not sure who. If that's Mr. Scars and Mr.Scars equals Milo, then "Milo" looks different
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ShadowTurtleInc Turned
Posts : 686 Current Win Points : 306 Join date : 2013-06-12 Location : Lavender Town
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Sun Sep 01, 2013 4:52 pm | |
| The next video better not be in like 3 months..... honestly this was not worth the wait. AT ALL. | |
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JustinDGBZ Watched
Posts : 202 Current Win Points : 95 Join date : 2013-05-28 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Mon Sep 02, 2013 1:27 am | |
| This was pretty good! - Spoiler:
Adam's acting in this is great as usual, and I can really feel the emotion coming from him, like we usually can in TribeTwelve entries. We've got some good story progression going on here, what with the briefcase and Mary Asher's death. I was hoping that Noah would actually be face-to-face with Mr.Scars but this works fine. We've got some creepy parts of this video, like with Mr.Scars putting his hand on the door and the crime scene photos of Mary Asher are spooky.
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PostIt Anxious
Posts : 53 Current Win Points : 17 Join date : 2011-08-06
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:14 am | |
| There are pros and cons for me. I feel like the ideas were interesting, the pictures were excellently excuted. (though the newspaper clipping sounded like it was on real paper other than newsprint. Not a big detail but I got a little ocd about it XD)
I wish a little more action had been used (Going and getting the briefcase, rather than receiving it). Mostly though I didn't understand why he had the same 'big reveal' twice. Maybe I missed something but it seemed like the phone call was a big reveal, and then opening the envelope was the same big reveal in a different way. I suppose he was trying to achieve a nice emotional climax, but it seemed a little repetative (to me). Maybe he could have just done the envelope opening. Maybe there's something significant I'm missing, who knows?
Looking forward to the next update, as always though. | |
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DKaine Anxious
Posts : 62 Current Win Points : 16 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 39 Location : Florida, USA
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Mon Sep 02, 2013 3:51 pm | |
| A really good entry, and I'm excited about possibly seeing a lot more of TribeTwelve and EMH come out soon, rather than the 6 month wait between vids. Fall seems to be a really good time for lots of delicious updates. The figure at the door was a really good touch, and even though I was expecting it a bit, it still gave me the shivers. - However...:
I will agree with XYZombie about Adam's acting and timing, though - it's a bit of an immersion killer when his emotions aren't believable or don't follow a realistic pattern/transition.
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Chieftain1 Taken
Posts : 446 Current Win Points : 193 Join date : 2013-02-15 Age : 24 Location : Ireland
| Subject: Re: Obituary (TT VIDEO) Tue Sep 03, 2013 1:44 pm | |
| Tribe Twelve fandom right now: - Spoiler:
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