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 I humbly submit my offering.

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PostSubject: I humbly submit my offering.   Fri May 27, 2011 7:56 pm

Well, I have a hatchling Slenderblog here. It is only just over a week old. I make no claims as to quality of writing. Some bafflement is to be expected. Please try to address your questions to the character if it is at all possible. Criticism, however, should be directed to me. And now, without further ado, http://c291cmnl.wordpress.com/.

PS: I am not a Catholic, so that part is very likely to contain mistakes. I apologize if it offends anybody.
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PostSubject: Re: I humbly submit my offering.   Fri May 27, 2011 8:18 pm

This Catholic sees no egregious errors. Only that strange feeling I get whenever I encounter another translation of a prayer. Since I always mentally hear the words I grew up with and then it feels jarring when the version before doesn't follow it. But that's not your fault. It's the fault of those Tower of Babel bastards Razz
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PostSubject: Re: I humbly submit my offering.   Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:19 pm

OK, I ended this. My subpar writing and poor plot planning held it back. I had some ideas that I still think were good, but failed to use them productively (or at all in some cases). At least I learned some stuff doing the research.
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