Open Arms and Closed Eyes

This was actually started by a friend of mine. He's doing a pretty good job, so far. Things are starting to happen here. Deserves a look-see for all you blog-readers out there! Or if you want to start reading some, even.
Open Arms and Closed Eyes

It's a good read, but I have to be honest.

Con's: It seemed a little too rushed. "I'm a normal kid, and OH NOES HERE THE SLENDAMON!!" And not much is known about the character, besides a bored kid grounded.

Pro's: I liked the use of Pic's, and the Witch's Castle shot looks amazing. The Sect. is an attention grabber (nice work!) The newspaper clipping was also a nice touch.

I'm very curious about how this will all lead up. So on a scale of 1/10 I'd give it a 7/10

Overal l, I like it I love the use of pictures, to me it just makes it that much more creepy to me. it does seem aa TINY bit rushed, but I don't realy mind. I'm interested to see where it all goes. In my opinion, 9.5/10. Pretty sure it will be a 10/10 very soon for me x3

It seems there is another blog linked to this one.
http://scdiaries.blogspot.com/