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Wurzog
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PostSubject: Slendy Blog?   Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:13 pm

So my friend linked me to a blog the other day and I quickly found out it was his. He is who introduced me to the Slenderman Mythos and I loves all the vlogs and blogs. So I'm guessing this is his take on a slendy blog. He won't give me the details on it. I just feel like helping him out in getting people to read it.

http://escapethekeepers.wordpress.com/

There it is! Please give feed back positive or negative. There isn't much on it yet.
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PostSubject: Re: Slendy Blog?   Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:02 pm

It is a little early to give any advice on the blog. The only thing I can think to mention is the splitting of the introduction into three parts. I think if they were all combined into one, and moved around a bit, it would have been a really solid first post. But with it being split like that... I just found it to be a little odd. That being said, however, your friend may have done that for a stylistic reason, and with more character development, that decision will make more sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Slendy Blog?   Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:11 pm

Stovetop wrote:
It is a little early to give any advice on the blog. The only thing I can think to mention is the splitting of the introduction into three parts. I think if they were all combined into one, and moved around a bit, it would have been a really solid first post. But with it being split like that... I just found it to be a little odd. That being said, however, your friend may have done that for a stylistic reason, and with more character development, that decision will make more sense.

Yeah i don't know why he did that. But he will be happy to get some feed back.
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