ParkerJones01

I have uploaded my very first video for my series.

Please give me feedback on the video.

Link: https://www.youtube.com/user/ParkerJones01

EDIT:
Here's the second video:

Please like the video!!

Here's the third!!

Wow, you're pretty cute

Anyways, as for the series itself, even though the premise has been done multiple times, I believe that it haves a lot of potential, and I'm subscribed.

goomba771 wrote:

Wow, you're pretty cute

Anyways, as for the series itself, even though the premise has been done multiple times, I believe that it haves a lot of potential, and I'm subscribed.

Thank you for the compliment and the feedback lol. I still want more feedback so everyone please let me know what you think!

Needs some more sprucing up, is all i can say,
but keep up the good work!

if if have any ideas, i will tell you!

MichaelisHere wrote:

Needs some more sprucing up, is all i can say,
but keep up the good work!

if if have any ideas, i will tell you!

Thank you! And please do tell me!

Apparently Vlamme(me) is helping him(Parker).

Check out the second video!!

I didn't see anything wrong with the video itself, other than there being no distortion when Slendy appeared. Keep up the good work, mate.

goomba771 wrote:

That video was soooo kinky

I didn't see anything wrong with the video itself, other than there being no distortion when Slendy appeared. Keep up the good work, mate.

I really liked it! keep it up man it feels good.

Third video will be up in a few days! Look out for it!

Check out the third video!!

Please like it!

Interesting...

Spoiler:

goomba771 wrote:

Interesting...

Spoiler:

Yes he was.

Ohhh I like

projectbigfoot1 wrote:

Ohhh I like

Thanks! Working on Log #3 now. Trying to figure out colored pixel distortion..

AlwaysWatches wrote:

projectbigfoot1 wrote:

Ohhh I like

Thanks! Working on Log #3 now. Trying to figure out colored pixel distortion..

If you need any more help don't mind to pm on skype

3rd Video:


I'm very unsure of how I should feel about this entry

Spoiler:

goomba771 wrote:

3rd Video:


I'm very unsure of how I should feel about this entry

Spoiler:

Parker goes there to find a clue. The only clue is the page.

EDIT:
The page is intended to be a warning of something dangerous.

Newest Video:
 

Hey guys I posted a new video I hope you will enjoy and please like it too! it really helps!

This is pretty good and has a lot of potential! I like the plot and reason of it, of how a guy is looking for his missing best friend, it gives a lot of reason for filming right away along with some place to go to. The effects are great, Slendy's appearance was spooky and the distortion went really well. The acting is pretty good here too, Log #1 could've been better as it felt like too noticeable of a script reading and felt rushed, but the most recent entry was really good and the danger of the shady decision of going to the location can really be felt. This feels kinda a lot like Marble Hornets, which is good but be careful with using those Operator symbols; continue this series and keep up the good work!

Interesting..... I think the next video will decide wether I will put this on my watch list or not.

Some problems I have are some of the cliches, especially the 'Slender' note, the operator symbol was not bad but no really needed. Also the acting in Log 1 was just, bleh.

BUT! THe Slenderman and distortion was great! The atmosphere is spot on Your acting is great.....

hmmm I am interested to see where this will go.

Thank you both Justin and ShadowTurtle. I appreciate what you both have said as it means a lot to me and my crew. I will use what you have said and better my series. Look out of Log #6. It's currently being edited.

Log #6 is out! Please give it a like if you enjoyed it!