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Subject: Re: Jacob: The Series Sat Jan 31, 2015 12:24 pm
Good episode. My only problem is that the reactions of your characters don't quite seem realistic. I mean, Jacob has just been presented with unflinching proof of the supernatural, has been abducted from his house and teleported into the middle of the woods, and his reaction is...basically mild annoyance.
Also, I'm sorry, but some of the dialogue really didn't seem natural ("Why don't I walk over there and kill you myself?" Jacob says, after being confronted with a faceless man). It seems like all of these characters are just kind of taking this life threatening paranormal stuff that may or may not have killed Jacob's parents in stride.
On an extremely positive note, that was one hell of a Slenderman. He looked cool, and he has that passive danger that made him so scary when he started out. And THANK YOU for not building him up with Operator Symbol overdose.
Posts : 53 Current Win Points : 31 Join date : 2014-12-22 Age : 26
Subject: Re: Jacob: The Series Sun Feb 01, 2015 8:10 pm
Jacob's an idiot lol. Thanks for compliments!
Here's a preview of the next episode, which will introduce a new character! This is also the mid-season finale, so there will be about 2 month gap between 6 and 7, which will then return to regular schedule.
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