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Subject: Re: Abnormal Happenings Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:19 am
OH GOD THIS IS SOME OF MY WORST WRITING EVER WHY WOULD YOU LINK IT?
Oh, I should maybe elaborate on why it sucks. See, it was mostly a joke so I didn't put that much effort into it. As a result, the pace is rushed, the writing is bland, and the protagonist is flatter than that 7-year-old girl I fucked that can of soda that's been sitting open in the fridge for a month.