Nedark
Stalked
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Age : 111
Location : New Rome
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Vivi
Blackout
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Age : 32
Location : Alexandria, Gaia
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| Winpoint for you, it was well thought out and definitely unsettling at some moments, but overwhelmingly wonderfully written! | |
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Satyrcynic
Watched
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Current Win Points : 187
Join date : 2010-12-10
Age : 34
Location : Alchemilla Hospital
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| Winpoint here also. I picked apart the grammar in a few places, but it had that delightful combination of sheer horror in the middle and being intellectually unsettling at the end. | |
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Hither-Thither
Observer
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Age : 30
Location : Confessional #2
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| I'm liking those allusions. And hurray for Latin! | |
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Nedark
Stalked
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Current Win Points : 188
Join date : 2010-12-11
Age : 111
Location : New Rome
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