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PostSubject: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:18 pm

Yo everyone, Watching Whispers is now on youtube at this link:http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLCA44A8105A94E7AC&feature=plcp

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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:59 pm

This actually sounds pretty interesting. I subbed. :3 I'm excited to see how this will turn out.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 1:06 pm

I think you will like it Seth, I kind of based it off of Marble Hornets.

UPDATE: Entry 1 of Watching Whispers is now online! (it took 84 minutes to upload it to youtube)


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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:41 pm

That's a pretty good start. I definitely feel the Marble Hornets elements, from the "Entry" titles to the random coughing fits in the house.

Overall, good job! Keep it up.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:41 pm

The Start is interesting, but it has too much disortion for a first entry to me. Surprised
I surely will follow this series, because it looks promissing Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:50 pm

Not bad. >Insert not bad obama pic here<
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:02 am

How much planning did you put into this, Zetto, might I ask?
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:01 am

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How much planning did you put into this, Zetto, might I ask?

I actually planned this out for about 3 weeks, Not bad huh?

And thanks every one for watching, You have convinced me to make more so later today I will upload entry 2 to youtube.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:26 pm

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sethlapod555 wrote:
How much planning did you put into this, Zetto, might I ask?

I actually planned this out for about 3 weeks, Not bad huh?

And thanks every one for watching, You have convinced me to make more so later today I will upload entry 2 to youtube.

You can actually get a lot done in 3 weeks, so I think it's gonna turn out good!

Can't wait for Entry 2!
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:28 pm

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Zetto1995 wrote:
sethlapod555 wrote:
How much planning did you put into this, Zetto, might I ask?

I actually planned this out for about 3 weeks, Not bad huh?

And thanks every one for watching, You have convinced me to make more so later today I will upload entry 2 to youtube.

You can actually get a lot done in 3 weeks, so I think it's gonna turn out good!

Can't wait for Entry 2!

Entry 2 should be up in one hour or so man, and yeah you can get a hell of a lot done in a few weeks.

UPDATE: Entry 2 is now online.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:36 pm

Niiiiiiiiiiiiice cliffhanger. I enjoyed this one, too. Still got a bit of a Marble Hornets feel at moments.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:36 pm

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Niiiiiiiiiiiiice cliffhanger. I enjoyed this one, too. Still got a bit of a Marble Hornets feel at moments.

Glad you liked it, I filmed that one today because it's nice and foggy here, I was going to do more filming but my camra battery died & I dont seem to have spares.Sad

Entry 3 should be up be tommorow,
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:30 pm

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sethlapod555 wrote:
Niiiiiiiiiiiiice cliffhanger. I enjoyed this one, too. Still got a bit of a Marble Hornets feel at moments.

Glad you liked it, I filmed that one today because it's nice and foggy here, I was going to do more filming but my camra battery died & I dont seem to have spares.Sad

Entry 3 should be up be tommorow,
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Gah, I know how the camera battery story goes. We have trouble with that one all the time with our series. We always keep spares in the camera case.

And awesome! Can't wait for the next installment.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Thu Apr 26, 2012 10:38 am

The next entry will be up in a half hour, Always nice to hear that you like my work man, It fans like you that keep me going.Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:33 pm

Super nice Entry 3, man. I love the fact that there is just one constant noise throughout the entire clip: No voices, no background noise. I always loved those parts of Slender Series.

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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Thu Apr 26, 2012 2:33 pm

sethlapod555 wrote:
Super nice Entry 3, man. I love the fact that there is just one constant noise throughout the entire clip: No voices, no background noise. I always loved those parts of Slender Series.

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Once again thanks for watching man, I always liked these parts to. Entry 3 should be up by Monday.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:08 pm

Zetto1995 wrote:
sethlapod555 wrote:
Super nice Entry 3, man. I love the fact that there is just one constant noise throughout the entire clip: No voices, no background noise. I always loved those parts of Slender Series.

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Once again thanks for watching man, I always liked these parts to. Entry 3 should be up by Monday.
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Cannot wait.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:54 am

The wait is over man, Even as I type this Entry 4 is uploading to Youtube, It should be up in two hours

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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:43 am

hmm, Leo, huh? Damn, now there is somebody else in the verse with my name. I really didn't think that would happen. Also both of us have "watching" in our Vlog titles.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:20 pm

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hmm, Leo, huh? Damn, now there is somebody else in the verse with my name. I really didn't think that would happen. Also both of us have "watching" in our Vlog titles.

Crazy huh man?

Entry 4 is now online everyone!
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Mon Apr 30, 2012 12:44 pm

Constructive criticism time. Don't feel bad. This is how we grow as creators. I, myself, have received mountains of it.

Intro: Your titles move to fast. you need to leave them up for as long as it would take to speak them comfortably.

Entry 1: Same complaint about titles. Way to much visual distortion and the visual distortion you used was uninspired. Talk to yourself less and when you do speak try not to name everything that we can clearly see you doing on camera. In other words don't be captain obvious so much. Every now and again is fine, but pick your moments carefully. The worst thing I heard you say was right after you got done coughing "Gotta get out while I can. Weird things been happening." Also, why take that Thumb drive? You didn't present a convincing enough reason to take it, Its not like it was out of place or there was a note stuck to it or anything. Do you often steal from your friends who aren't home? Those are the things going through my mind after you took it.

Entry 2: Same complaint about titles. Show don't tell. Don't tell us he saw something scary. You should actually show us the reason he ran. If it is somewhere at that part where he zoomed in for a second then I couldn't see it even with a paused screen on my 40 inch tv.

Entry 3: Prepare the scene before shooting. When Steve goes to look out the window, but that item is in the way so he has to move it. That shouldn't have happened.

Entry 4: Way to much talking about things that don't matter. Its not building mood just the annoyance level You could have made this episode a lot shorter and it would have been more effective. Also watch doing feet cam. There is no reason to film your feet walking or the ground sliding by unless something of importance is going to happen in that camera angle. Be careful about how much you take from MH. You could have done something different with that mask and it would have been much more acceptable.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Mon Apr 30, 2012 4:29 pm

Tahrgat wrote:
Constructive criticism time. Don't feel bad. This is how we grow as creators. I, myself, have received mountains of it.

Intro: Your titles move to fast. you need to leave them up for as long as it would take to speak them comfortably.

Entry 1: Same complaint about titles. Way to much visual distortion and the visual distortion you used was uninspired. Talk to yourself less and when you do speak try not to name everything that we can clearly see you doing on camera. In other words don't be captain obvious so much. Every now and again is fine, but pick your moments carefully. The worst thing I heard you say was right after you got done coughing "Gotta get out while I can. Weird things been happening." Also, why take that Thumb drive? You didn't present a convincing enough reason to take it, Its not like it was out of place or there was a note stuck to it or anything. Do you often steal from your friends who aren't home? Those are the things going through my mind after you took it.

Entry 2: Same complaint about titles. Show don't tell. Don't tell us he saw something scary. You should actually show us the reason he ran. If it is somewhere at that part where he zoomed in for a second then I couldn't see it even with a paused screen on my 40 inch tv.

Entry 3: Prepare the scene before shooting. When Steve goes to look out the window, but that item is in the way so he has to move it. That shouldn't have happened.

Entry 4: Way to much talking about things that don't matter. Its not building mood just the annoyance level You could have made this episode a lot shorter and it would have been more effective. Also watch doing feet cam. There is no reason to film your feet walking or the ground sliding by unless something of importance is going to happen in that camera angle. Be careful about how much you take from MH. You could have done something different with that mask and it would have been much more acceptable.

Thanks man, I will take this all to heart and try to improve.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue May 01, 2012 12:31 am

Hey, I edited your videos. I made them shorter and I added the Slender Man to the video you found on the thumb drive. He is standing on the school just before Steve runs. I made both videos found on the thumb drive,so far, into one episode. You don't have to use my edits. I do this for fun. I will not be adding titles to the videos. If you would like the videos to use or re-re edit then you can rip them off of youtube or I can e mail them to you. I hope you like my re-edits.


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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue May 01, 2012 10:25 am

@ Tahrget:

Awesome job man, Please E-mail them to me, And by the way how did you do the audio distortion, I cant seem to figure it out.
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PostSubject: Re: Watching Whispers   Tue May 01, 2012 11:02 am

Well, I figured that static was your main distortion so I went to youtube and found the sound effect for static. I ripped it from youtube with Youtube Downloader:

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Then I simply added it to the audio track. After that I reduced the sound effect's audio level so that it would not be to overbearing on the scene.

I made a mistake though. I can not e mail these to you because they are too large. But if you use that program, it is free and I use it all the time, you can get them easily. Install the program. then when you have it up and running you should change the "Save To" feature to your desktop. So when a video has finished downloading it is easily accessible. Next copy the Youtube video's "Share" link and paste the link in the "Enter the URL" bar in the program. BEFORE YOU DO THAT READ THIS!> Generally the url will appear without you actually pasting it. All it actually takes is for you to put the curser over the bar and the url should just appear there after you have copied it. The final step is to change the "Download Quality" to "HQ 360p (MP4). Now you are ready to hit the "Download" button. When the video is done it will appear on your desktop and you can re-upload them. It may take a bit to download these videos because it took me a bit to get them. For the mp4 file type they are massive and I'm not sure why they are so many mb large.
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