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McCheezBurgarz Untainted
Posts : 8 Current Win Points : -14 Join date : 2011-07-13 Age : 27 Location : Your Window
| Subject: Children Of The Lines Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:04 pm | |
| Hi thar, This is my slender blog,i`m kinda new at this so I try not to plug this... It`s based on a past experience where I thought I was going crazy. Like when I was sitting in my room and in a reflection I saw HIM. Anyway I feel like it deserves a chance. Allen Ride is one of those kids who are complicated but pretty kool. Yes he has a few problems. so....... Here its at http://childrenofthelines.blogspot.com/2011_07_01_archive.htmlTell meh what u think so far. Yes I admit Allen is a dick.
Last edited by McCheezBurgarz on Wed Jul 13, 2011 10:07 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | DaLadybugMan Blackout
Posts : 563 Current Win Points : 488 Join date : 2010-12-28 Age : 32 Location : Now I am everywhere
| Subject: Re: Children Of The Lines Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:09 pm | |
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| | | McCheezBurgarz Untainted
Posts : 8 Current Win Points : -14 Join date : 2011-07-13 Age : 27 Location : Your Window
| Subject: Re: Children Of The Lines Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:12 pm | |
| - DaLadyBugMan wrote:
- Cool plug, bro.
What do you mean? plug? | |
| | | Zander Survivor
Posts : 1570 Current Win Points : 640 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 32 Location : Gone
| Subject: Re: Children Of The Lines Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:57 pm | |
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| | | CheckersValentine Stalked
Posts : 359 Current Win Points : 101 Join date : 2011-05-05 Location : Around
| Subject: Re: Children Of The Lines Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:11 pm | |
| It's ok to admit that it's your blog. Although, as Zander has already said, try getting to know us. Buy us a drink first. As for the blog, it's a little jumpy. Slow down, pace out your thoughts, and give us some Personality before you get to the "OhGodOhGodSlenderman" Stuff. Edit edit edit. Use spell check, check your grammar, make sure the entries make sense. Get someone else to read them before you post them, and have them critique. Cheers. | |
| | | McCheezBurgarz Untainted
Posts : 8 Current Win Points : -14 Join date : 2011-07-13 Age : 27 Location : Your Window
| Subject: srry Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:46 pm | |
| - CheckersValentine wrote:
- It's ok to admit that it's your blog. Although, as Zander has already said, try getting to know us. Buy us a drink first.
As for the blog, it's a little jumpy. Slow down, pace out your thoughts, and give us some Personality before you get to the "OhGodOhGodSlenderman" Stuff. Edit edit edit. Use spell check, check your grammar, make sure the entries make sense. Get someone else to read them before you post them, and have them critique.
Cheers. Yeah man, this my first blog, im gonna edit it out a little, add a video where my 13yr old immpresion goes to play.And also edit this page so it`s not a butt plug Looks like Allen added an update. MOD EDIT: Hoo Hoo Hoo! My first mod thingy. Please don't double post. -Jeebles | |
| | | McCheezBurgarz Untainted
Posts : 8 Current Win Points : -14 Join date : 2011-07-13 Age : 27 Location : Your Window
| Subject: Sorry Mon Jul 25, 2011 3:25 am | |
| I had to get some stuff done, but this isnt dead. | |
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