My Blog: The Opus

So I made a slendy blog a couple of weeks ago. I wasn't too sure when I was supposed to post it, but I figured it'd be interesting enough to actually make a thread on the nation about it.

Click here for the blog. Comments and Criticism appreciated. (Criticism preferred on here, of course)

Looks cool. I wouldn't have the labels 'slender man' and 'slenderblog', though. I'm not one to nag a lot about immersion, but it's just... really bugging me right now.

Commented on the blog, by the way. I'm Isaac G-01348.

CollenFromFear wrote:

Looks cool. I wouldn't have the labels 'slender man' and 'slenderblog', though. I'm not one to nag a lot about immersion, but it's just... really bugging me right now.

Commented on the blog, by the way. I'm Isaac G-01348.

It was the best idea I had at the time. Besides, I didn't want people thinking it was an actual blog.

Plus, I have no idea what to do with blogs, anyways. First time thing for me.

Well, you're starting off fairly well so far. I'd suggest, if you hadn't already planned on it, to somehow work all that you've introduced into the overall story. After all, that's the sole purpose of an introduction section: To introduce the motifs and characters the reader will see throughout the story. Law of conservation of detail, and all that! Only the important is mentioned!

..but I got into a bit of a ramble there. Feel free to do your blog how you want. xD I commented on the first post. I can't really say all that much until it's a finished product, or at least until more stuff happens.

DJay32 wrote:

Well, you're starting off fairly well so far. I'd suggest, if you hadn't already planned on it, to somehow work all that you've introduced into the overall story. After all, that's the sole purpose of an introduction section: To introduce the motifs and characters the reader will see throughout the story. Law of conservation of detail, and all that! Only the important is mentioned!

Regarding characters, I don't know too well on how to add more. Am I supposed to be my other characters? I'm more used to standard story telling like novels, etc. so this is new ground for me. It's a bit unnerving, really.

You can add them like "I met this person today, his name was Bob." Or you can add them by setting up separate email accounts and writing them manually, it depends on if you want multiple viewpoint characters or if you want it to just be told from one narrator's perspective. o:

After a week of nothing, I finally got around to adding a new post. Gah, I hate waiting so long.