Dark Leaves Blog

Hey guys,
My name is Ivan, I'm new and I live in Bosnia & Hertzegowina. In my blog I'll be using a sort of a pseudonym: Ethan Green
I started a blog, so could you check it out and tell me how you like it?

darkleaves.blogspot.com

Thank you in advance, just post your thoughts of it here.

Edit: thanks projectbigfoot1

Cokespray wrote:

Hey guys,
I started a blog, so could you check it out and tell me how you like it?

darkleaves.blogspot.com

Thank you in advance, just post your thoughts of it here.

Hey there good to see you on slendernation.

before you post this its best to introduce yourself because i see this is your first post

Have a nice Day

Hey there, Cokespray! Making a thread for our own work as your first post isn't generally isn't a good idea here, as we have a rule and have had a problem with Plug-N-Runners; people who plug their work and never post again. That's why we have the 7-day link-posting block in place.

Don't worry I plan to make myself a constant member. I already started reading some topics to see who's who and stuff. Love your signature, I spazzed out of laughter when I saw it

Just to clear this up I wasn't saying that you would plug-n-run, I was just explaining the rule that's all.

And thank you! It's been my sig since I joined.

Cokespray wrote:

Don't worry I plan to make myself a constant member. I already started reading some topics to see who's who and stuff. Love your signature, I spazzed out of laughter when I saw it

Cokespray love your signature xD

thanks, your's is creepy as hell

Cokespray wrote:

thanks, your's is creepy as hell

Oh thank you haha

Guys, any opinions on what I should/shouldn't do? I'm fairly new with blogs.

I have a few problems to point out.

1. I have no emotional attachment to the character. You gave half of a post to introduce him, and did so quite sloppy.

2. The story. You abandoned subtlety, and dived right in, and I think your story is lesser due to it. It feels rushed and overdone.

3. Character =/= Story. Your character to the story ins't very good. One post he's freaking out, the next he's feeling great? It doesn't make sense, as well as the other characters that have "hacked" your blog.

Honestly, I don't like it.

Thanks for the review, I think I might have rushed it a bit. I don't know if I wipe the blog now or do I continue and attempt to make it better? I personally don't like it at the point. The thing with me is I just can't wait to make the next post. That's why it's too rushed. Come to the slendernation tinychat if you have time: tinychat.com/slendernationtc

Cokespray wrote:

Thanks for the review, I think I might have rushed it a bit. I don't know if I wipe the blog now or do I continue and attempt to make it better? I personally don't like it at the point.

You might just want to scrap it. Aside from rushing it, you haven't brought anything really new to the verse. If you want to do one entry a day, it can work, but it must fit in with the story (like with my blog)

Ok, if you can, come to the tinychat to help me a bit. Wiped the blog. I'm gonna start out different this time.

Cokespray wrote:

Ok, if you can, come to the tinychat to help me a bit.

Can't at the moment. If you want my help, message me any questions you have.

Haven't got any questions in general, just want someone to help me with the plot.

you rang?

I'm all sorts of about plot and stuff even if I don't do any writing currently!

PM me or respond here, I'm always glad to help!

I decided to leave the blog for summer vacation, as I'm really stressed out since I wake up at 6AM and fall asleep at midnight, it's a bit stressing but I can manage to post here and discuss the plot. My summer vacation starts at 14. the June, but I'll be able to post a week before. Cheers, and if you'd like to help or even collaborate with me, then please PM me or post here! Thanks in advance!

I'm restarting my blog, so anyone willing to help, please PM me. I renamed it though, you can find the link in my sig.

Is it an Slenderman Blog or.. Because I could help if you want 

ps. i got to much sparetime

Yeah, it's a Slendy blog with Fear elements, I planned on adding The Rake, as well as some characters I made up on my own.