These Endless Shadows (FINALE)

My Slenderman series! Feedback is GREATLY appreciated!

I like this series.

I like it

Is he reading from a script in the fourth video??

Otherwise, I like the series so far. A couple of questionable scenes, and he could use a little better scripting, but not bad overall.

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The videos are a bit short, but this seems to be interesting. What I seem to get so far is that the protagonist's ears bleed for an unknown reason (which could connect to things later on and possibly to the blood spots by his door?) and that there's some proxy behavior going on, along with the channel being made to promote some sort of book he's creating although I'm not quite sure about the details surrounding it. The fourth video was creepy. Although the Operator symbol in the recent video is a bit clichéd but it does further confirm it as a Slenderman series. I'm going to be paying attention to this as it seems there's some mystery going on that could be intriguing.

I'm out. The cliches are a bit too much for me, and I don't like his script reading. I'll keep track of this thread to see if he improves, but I'm already following too many series and I don't want this to be one more on my plate.

I wish him the best of luck in this endeavor.

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New video, uploaded yesterday....

Lol, the irony at 1:52... that creeped me out. He better be careful with that camera if he's going to be playing airsoft.

Thanks for all the criticism! I will continue to make this series the best it can be!

I totally understand why you pretended to be an outsider. It can be hard putting yourself/your work out there.

Okay SO I will be releasing a new video relatively soon. Now I am going to want some MAJOR feedback on the upcoming video so those who are not caught up with what I have going on, if you can, I would love it if you could catch up of the minor 6 videos I have so when I release the next one you can help give some accurate feedback. Thanks.

You got it mate..I'm loving what you have posted

Wow..thats fucking scary....

I'm slightly worried for you bro..keep safe..

Jane And Jeff wrote:

Wow..thats fucking scary....

I'm slightly worried for you bro..keep safe..

 Haha comment on the video! Not here silly. Here is the place to give me criticism on the show! 

Oh in that case...THIS SHIT SUCKS!

(jk I like it! )

(I found an old rp..and copied it from a forum way back..SlenderMan RolePlay: TROR (The real of reality XD)

(Sorry to bug you but..this is the only way I seem to be able to contact ya XD)

You can just PM me or Skype chat me. Iz easier thataway

(Ohhhh...makes more sense..anyways check it!)

I'm liking where this is going so far. The latest entry is confusing and strange and that's perfect. I think you're acting is good and the story seems to be flowing nicely. I especially like how your character just thinks the drawings on him were done by his brother and quickly decided they couldn't be anything bad. Many people have this mentally of "nothing bad will ever happen to me!" and that's exactly what you showed, a human being human. I get tired of series where one bad thing happens and the main character is suddenly fear stricken for the rest of their life.
All I would say otherwise is just be careful with how you use your masked character. Just remember that while proxies exist in many slender series you shouldn't just copy something other people have done, really make him/her your own. Obviously you've done nothing wrong so far, that's just a simple forewarning.
Otherwise great job so far!

Thanks! I have some really cool stuff involving the mask. It is COMPLETELY new so no need to fear! Thanks again!

I don't doubt you for a second! Can't wait to see the next upload!

I like the idea of a book being part of the central plot instead of tapes or a film. Who would do something bland like that?


Any ways, I like the acting, story, and filming style so far. The distortion I have mixed feelings on, but that is mainly because I have not seen stuff like the black dots before. 

This series has my interest and I will be excited to see a new video soon.