OneHundredYardStare

sethlapod555 wrote:

TailsFoxy wrote:

Here´s 21:

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Their probably...

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This series is keeping me intrigued.

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wow that was....crazy O.O

Watched one vid out of curiosity, and ended up watching the rest the same night. I'm loving this — it has everything I'm looking for in a series.

TailsFoxy wrote:

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wow that was....crazy O.O

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Alright, after watching this all the way through along with you guys' commentary, I gotta say, I'm not at all impressed with this series. While watching, I scribbled down some notes, and this is basically what they said; "UUUUUUUGHHHHH (x); overuse of word 'infection' and coughing ugh; using tape boooo; the brown/blonde girl went crazy a little fast?" and some other things that I'm going to discuss in relative length below.
Acting. was thinking: it's like a high school play. Over dramatic, over pronounced, over saturated. But, I really liked the antibody's acting in Twenty Three. Now that the group had kind of accepted him (which in my opinion is hella weird because they just met this weird dude in a gas mask who keeps screaming that he thinks too much?) he kind of established a role in the series. He was just kind of in the background, checking out this strange dude who came to the door talking about the girls' missing friend, hammer in hand, ready to attack. When he was in the mirror of the car at the very end was cool, almost kind of spooky. It was a neat detail in an over hectic entry.

As for the girls, they're acting goes along with the high school comment. In other words, it was generally pretty bad. Ellie's(?) was better, but not by much. The whole "going crazy and laughing and screaming for no reason and pissing off everyone around you" character doesn't fly with me in slenderseries, with the exception sometimes being Evan in EMH. It's cheap.

Something that was discussed earlier in the thread was originality and looking professional: Some people said it was unoriginal but looked professional, other said vice versa. Welcome to this week's episode of "Jenn is going to give you no slack on your stupid slenderseries": I think it lacks both. Operator symbols (UUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH), using tape-based cameras (really. you're really going to use tape. really. that shit is getting real old, real fast.), use of children(again, really?), coughing up blood for NO reason (if i see one more series do this, so help me--), (over)use distortion (50000% done) and mentally unstable people running around constantly(Agrees with everyone who has said this series is too chaotic and needs to take a breather now and then): none of them are which are original, or even presented well at all in this series.

I don't even know how to conclude this post without saying, "It was really bad and you should feel bad. I'm out.". It has it's moments, but all in all this series really needs to figure out where it's going. Confusing, chaotic videos and people going missing constantly is not interesting or enjoyable.

/opinions

quofomo wrote:

Alright, after watching this all the way through along with you guys' commentary, I gotta say, I'm not at all impressed with this series. While watching, I scribbled down some notes, and this is basically what they said; "UUUUUUUGHHHHH (x); overuse of word 'infection' and coughing ugh; using tape boooo; the brown/blonde girl went crazy a little fast?" and some other things that I'm going to discuss in relative length below.
Acting. was thinking: it's like a high school play. Over dramatic, over pronounced, over saturated. But, I really liked the antibody's acting in Twenty Three. Now that the group had kind of accepted him (which in my opinion is hella weird because they just met this weird dude in a gas mask who keeps screaming that he thinks too much?) he kind of established a role in the series. He was just kind of in the background, checking out this strange dude who came to the door talking about the girls' missing friend, hammer in hand, ready to attack. When he was in the mirror of the car at the very end was cool, almost kind of spooky. It was a neat detail in an over hectic entry.

As for the girls, they're acting goes along with the high school comment. In other words, it was generally pretty bad. Ellie's(?) was better, but not by much. The whole "going crazy and laughing and screaming for no reason and pissing off everyone around you" character doesn't fly with me in slenderseries, with the exception sometimes being Evan in EMH. It's cheap.

Something that was discussed earlier in the thread was originality and looking professional: Some people said it was unoriginal but looked professional, other said vice versa. Welcome to this week's episode of "Jenn is going to give you no slack on your stupid slenderseries": I think it lacks both. Operator symbols (UUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH), using tape-based cameras (really. you're really going to use tape. really. that shit is getting real old, real fast.), use of children(again, really?), coughing up blood for NO reason (if i see one more series do this, so help me--), (over)use distortion (50000% done) and mentally unstable people running around constantly(Agrees with everyone who has said this series is too chaotic and needs to take a breather now and then): none of them are which are original, or even presented well at all in this series.

I don't even know how to conclude this post without saying, "It was really bad and you should feel bad. I'm out.". It has it's moments, but all in all this series really needs to figure out where it's going. Confusing, chaotic videos and people going missing constantly is not interesting or enjoyable.

/opinions

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sethlapod555 wrote:

quofomo wrote:

my crazy long post

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I warned you about the relative length man. I warned you.
(maybe some people are having a really slow saturday and maybe some people wanted to make a hyper-critical slenderseries review) (maybe)

Here is 26:

quofomo wrote:

Alright, after watching this all the way through along with you guys' commentary, I gotta say, I'm not at all impressed with this series. While watching, I scribbled down some notes, and this is basically what they said; "UUUUUUUGHHHHH (x); overuse of word 'infection' and coughing ugh; using tape boooo; the brown/blonde girl went crazy a little fast?" and some other things that I'm going to discuss in relative length below.
Acting. was thinking: it's like a high school play. Over dramatic, over pronounced, over saturated. But, I really liked the antibody's acting in Twenty Three. Now that the group had kind of accepted him (which in my opinion is hella weird because they just met this weird dude in a gas mask who keeps screaming that he thinks too much?) he kind of established a role in the series. He was just kind of in the background, checking out this strange dude who came to the door talking about the girls' missing friend, hammer in hand, ready to attack. When he was in the mirror of the car at the very end was cool, almost kind of spooky. It was a neat detail in an over hectic entry.

As for the girls, they're acting goes along with the high school comment. In other words, it was generally pretty bad. Ellie's(?) was better, but not by much. The whole "going crazy and laughing and screaming for no reason and pissing off everyone around you" character doesn't fly with me in slenderseries, with the exception sometimes being Evan in EMH. It's cheap.

Something that was discussed earlier in the thread was originality and looking professional: Some people said it was unoriginal but looked professional, other said vice versa. Welcome to this week's episode of "Jenn is going to give you no slack on your stupid slenderseries": I think it lacks both. Operator symbols (UUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH), using tape-based cameras (really. you're really going to use tape. really. that shit is getting real old, real fast.), use of children(again, really?), coughing up blood for NO reason (if i see one more series do this, so help me--), (over)use distortion (50000% done) and mentally unstable people running around constantly(Agrees with everyone who has said this series is too chaotic and needs to take a breather now and then): none of them are which are original, or even presented well at all in this series.

I don't even know how to conclude this post without saying, "It was really bad and you should feel bad. I'm out.". It has it's moments, but all in all this series really needs to figure out where it's going. Confusing, chaotic videos and people going missing constantly is not interesting or enjoyable.

/opinions

Good gracious, I never thought I was ever going to comment on this trail head again but the sheer length and nature of your post has drawn me back out! Firstly, I must add my two cents, hopefully it won't be nearly as lengthy as yours, because then I don't think anyone would read it. (no offense but that was an eye-full). So, I mean, I can agree on some things, the acting can be and is pretty cheesy, and last season's filming is clearly not near as good as this season's. But I do think you are prejudiced to this sort of Slender-series. I mean, honestly to me the whole point of it is to be short, confusing, and a bit over-the-top. That is what I like about it. It always leaves me waiting for the next episode, because frankly, I do want to know what happens next. And I appreciate the acting, it feels more real to me than some of the basically dead other vlogs, it just makes more sense to be a bit more freaked, plus this whole thing seems much more stylized than other slender-blogs, with the use of editing and such, it seems that the acting reflects this in that it is also more stylized. And also, I'd like to say that it is implied (pretty clearly, at least to me) that there are sizable gaps in the videos and what is seen and not seen, therefore their reactions to things, like befriending the anti-body mask thing, can be justified in that the time lapse between the videos is not known. Also this whole unoriginality thing, I won't address (although, I did find some commentary on it from one of the actors online, I agreed with it, but find it much too long to type out here) I'll just say that it does have more originality than you give it credit for. And because I feel like I am going on too long, I'll address your end. I don't remember anyone "going missing" anywhere in the series, I may be wrong, and if I am, feel free to correct me. Also...This was bad and you should feel bad, doesn't do this series justice in the least. But that is just me, and of course, I hope you will appreciate my critique of your critique and my defense of this web-series (it wasn't the best defense, but alas, I did my best)

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sethlapod555 wrote:

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EDIT: Do they have any side accounts other than a YouTube by any chance? Like a blog or twitter?

sethlapod555 wrote:

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EDIT: Do they have any side accounts other than a YouTube by any chance? Like a blog or twitter?

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Sadly i don´t know about a twitter or a blog that they have IG...but i can look out and see if i can find something.