New Series- ShadowsInTheSunlight

DAT SLENDY!!!! O.O
and he seems to play games^^

will the penny videos be a different view of the happenings in your videos or a complete other story?

Penny will be more of a picture based blog/side Twitter. She's getting a lot of the attention sent her way. She's been getting e-mails, and recently got a few pictures sent from the same address that's been sending her the previous e-mails. If she does post videos, it's going to be at a different angle. My Dad has these cool recording glasses (which you saw, unfortunately, despite that she says it's recording, it wasn't and we discovered that the recording device on the glasses had broken, but we bought the part we needed so we're good now.) and he's lending them to her. At one point she's going to start uploading videos she captures with the glasses, but I don't want to give away too much yet.

ah ok, i saw that thing with the pics in the email on her twitteraccount.
and yes, these recording glasses are really cool /OOG off

Work more with your acting, especially the dialogue. While it's not early TribeTwelve-level bad, the characters seem only mildly concerned that some creeper is leaving notes around their home.

I liked the distortion, but it made it hard to understand what they were saying... which I suppose is sort of the point, but still. I prefer subtle effects, with the severe distortion saved for when he's right up in your grill. That's just what I like, though, so your mileage may vary.

That's all I got for now, hopefully I didn't make an ass out of myself.

The worst part, by far, with the acting is the rambling. We basically improvise, and wind up having the rambling edited out later. You'll probably be satisfied with the next update, or so I think after seeing your critique.

I always appreciate critique on my acting, this is really hard for me to do without have a director there, and having to actually be the director.

As for distortion,like in the second to last update where Mina finds the note telling her to go to the park, I generally use the distortion to signify that he's near, without necessarily showing him. I don't know, distortion (especially audio) always creeped me out, so yeah, but that video had the worst of it so far, and it's been planned that way. I'm trying to easier on the distortion in future videos.

Thank you thank you thank you so much for subscribing and critiquing. I need all the help I can get to make this a better series.

But trust me...I have an idea in mind I think is quite original...an idea I got from my Mother that I quite like, and that will tie in a lot of German stories from the city my family is from. Don't want to spoil it too much though...

also, as a german i like that you wanna tie in some german stories (and maybe some myths?) in the story

This video took three times to shoot because the first time I slipped on some wet grass and the second time I walked into a spider web and started freaking out....

And TailsFoxy, the German aspect of the Slender Man mythos is what got me interested in the fandom inthe first place ^.^ I found it sad that many Slender vlogs didn't play on it more, so I thought I would, and add a little of the stories I grew up with into it.

yay behind the scenes
Earnestly, i wanna see this 2 failed takes

Oh yeah, when i think about that, i can only name 2 or 3 vlogs that tried to involve the german aspect, but mostly just with a tie-in to WW2
Let´s see how you handle this and if i can guess the stories that you take, when i see them in your future videos^^

All of you guys...you're making this worth while, thanks for all the critique. This is a lot like taking acting classes again and I'm getting back into film and gaaaaah!

and i´m very courious about those videos that are on the ipod