so i watched the video and these are my
thoughts:
1. you based this off of the slender game, and MarbleHornets which
massively drops the
originality of your video
2. you jumped into the slendery bits of the story
FAR FAR to early. and introduction video would've been nice to at least explain the initial
reason for this channel existence.
3. the channel name. far to many people these days think they can just up and make a slender arg without any planning, thought, or even
creativity. by making the
name of your channel "ObliviousVictim" your viewers already know that you are aware of what did,is, or will happen to you. they know you are a so called "Victim". another reason that this was horrible is because once any viewer goes to watch one of your videos, they know its going to be or is meant to be scary, which drops the oh so important element of
surprise.
4. i can see that your meaning for this to be a found footage channel, probably leading to merge with the current times, but you can't have the found footage be "found" by the main character. that just dropped a possible whole chapter of the
plot, and the over all quality of the plot because as i said before, the viewers know you know what happened.
5. one of the things that pissed me off the most was the ridiculous amount of excess audio. my
fucking god, the audio was annoying as
hell. at times it would've been appropriate, but not the whole
fucking time. and the random music bits??? i know the audio was meant to give the viewers and enhanced
scary experience, but man it was too
annoying to try paying attention to for it to scare me, and trust me, o scare
easily.
now that ive written this whole review of your whole video, you had
better come back and read it.
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