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+11GLaDOS MadameMiz AlanAuch Shayde Vivi bilo Wrathling DaLadybugMan Alder Zander Hallow Sleeper 15 posters |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:03 pm | |
| Hey Slender Nation. I am here to say...I may have fucked up. Just...just read the Slender Man part of the latest entry in my blog and you'll know what this is about. So, did I fuck up as bad as I feel I did? I honestly don't know if I should take this back while I still have the chance, or keep it and man up to my mistake. http://hallowtruth.blogspot.com/EDIT: Since it's apparently not clear. In my blog...I made a Slender WOMAN...
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Zander Survivor
Posts : 1570 Current Win Points : 640 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 32 Location : Gone
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:08 pm | |
| I don't see the oopsie much? Idk. Brain'd dead. You'll have to exc̴͢uś̕è͝ ͟͝m̡e̶͡. | |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:13 pm | |
| The uh..."person" that is bald who my MC can't remember the face of, has the figure of a woman...so basically is a woman... | |
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Alder Observer
Posts : 169 Current Win Points : 99 Join date : 2011-01-19 Age : 32 Location : Eastbourne
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 6:46 pm | |
| Dude, if you're unhappy with something you put, change it. I alter stuff on my blog all the time - not that I'm a role model or anything. With any luck, more people will read it than have already read it. Better for you to break the fourth wall a little than be unhappy.
Even better...would your character alter and edit his blog, without regard for what really happened? | |
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Zander Survivor
Posts : 1570 Current Win Points : 640 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 32 Location : Gone
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:07 pm | |
| D͏U͏͏DÉ͏̶. MAK̀È A͏̴ ̷S͡L̷͟È͡ND́͜E҉̀͢R W̡Ó̴M͜͟A̴N͡.́ I̵ DA҉̷͜RĘ Y͏OU.
DO IT NOW. | |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:40 pm | |
| That IS what I basically did... And no, my character wouldn't. So I guess I've gotta stick to this then... | |
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DaLadybugMan Blackout
Posts : 565 Current Win Points : 488 Join date : 2010-12-28 Age : 33 Location : Now I am everywhere
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:27 pm | |
| I actually...don't see a problem. I haven't actually read your blog, so I may not be the person to be asking, but I'm of the opinion that, if you don't try to integrate with everyone out there and force your canon on them, you might be able to pull it off.
If not, you can probably always rewrite the post. | |
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Wrathling Untainted
Posts : 44 Current Win Points : 12 Join date : 2011-03-07 Age : 32 Location : Tennessee
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Tue Mar 29, 2011 9:49 pm | |
| I think you did fine hun. I don't see anything wrong. | |
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bilo Taken
Posts : 469 Current Win Points : 311 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 36 Location : Los Angeles
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:17 am | |
| It could be pretty cool, you don't have to change a thing. I've never done chaotic fiction or an ARG, but I imagine it takes a little bit of improvising. So improvise and just roll with it.
Also, the idea of a Slender Woman kinda makes me wonder if anyone could pull off a Kuchisake Onna blog/vlog... >.> | |
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Vivi Blackout
Posts : 507 Current Win Points : 488 Join date : 2010-12-10 Age : 32 Location : Alexandria, Gaia
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:52 am | |
| - bilo wrote:
- Also, the idea of a Slender Woman kinda makes me wonder if anyone could pull off a Kuchisake Onna blog/vlog... >.>
Now T̨HAT i͠s all ki̛nd͘s of a̛we͏som̵e. I͜ ̀w̨ould́ l̛ike̸ t͜ó ̷se͢e͟ ͡m͠ore obscur̶e ̴hơrr͞o̴r bļo͘gs in͝ ͝gener͘a̛l. M̡ay͢b͡e͢ bei͟n͘g̢ ̢of̶f̵ the be̢at͡e͜n̕ p̧ath҉ w̢ou̴l̛d forc̨e upo͠n ҉t͡h̢e͜m mo͢re͠ c̨re͢a̧t͟i̵v̕ity. I can bearly be͝ar t̨o r̵ea͠d̴ ͘m̵o͜st͜ blǫgs, to be honest, They're like one amalgamated ̷̬̘̪̣̞̙̗̲̗h͉͜i͖͙͈̯̕v͢͜҉̳̫̣̻̭̟̣̻e̥̤͚̤̫̼͙͠͠m̶̘̙̕i͎̤͝͝ṉ̹͠d̳̠̼̥̩.̴̵͇̦̩̕ Ḁ̶͘ͅn̶̨̪̦͓̱̻͈d̴͉̪͈͈̩̮͎̙ ҉̟̤n͏̮̮̙̗͔̘o҉̘̪͔̫̖t͖ ͈̟i̖̜̤͓̥̠̖͢n̸̴̛͍̩̞ ̥͚̹͠͡t̡̖̮̦̥̳ͅh͕͇͔̪̲̼͖͡e͇̻͚͈̭̖͍̘̮ ̵̛̜̦̲ͅg̰͎͘ͅo̶̶͉͇͚̺̮ǫ͞͏̭̼͉̼̝̻͈̺ͅd͓̝̪̞̣ͅ ̷̗̘̩̜͈̥̪͜ẉa̶͍̦͕̟̹̭̗͟͞ͅy̖̣̮̭.̮̤͚̹̲͕̪̘͞ | |
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Shayde Watched
Posts : 254 Current Win Points : 133 Join date : 2010-12-17
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:32 am | |
| Actually, it's pretty well done. And despite what you think, you've left it open ended as to whether it was a woman or a man (you said they "might have been a woman. She had a womanly figure, the fact she was bald must be why it sticks out in my mind." So it could just be an effeminate Slendy.) So really, it isn't so bad. Not as bad as my Nazi Proxies. That didn't go down well (or at least I don't think it did).
But I would like to see a Slender Woman, as it would be an interesting change from the norm. | |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:12 pm | |
| Hm...I guess that's true. I could still go either way with this. But if I do take it back, I'll only have one original idea in this blog. And the second idea has only been hinted at... Nazi Proxies? That...sounds both fucking wierd, and awesome at the same time. | |
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AlanAuch Observer
Posts : 162 Current Win Points : 34 Join date : 2010-12-12 Age : 41
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:00 am | |
| to throw my hat into the ring, I'd say roll with it. There's got to be potential for a Slenderwoman, surely | |
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MadameMiz Watched
Posts : 205 Current Win Points : 114 Join date : 2011-02-11 Age : 33 Location : North Carolina
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:31 pm | |
| honestly, that fact that you mentioned a possible slender woman just makes me want to read the blog. which i intend to do now =3 i think rolling with it would be a good idea, but i like that you've left it ambiguous so far | |
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GLaDOS Untainted
Posts : 33 Current Win Points : 53 Join date : 2011-03-29 Age : 31 Location : behind the scenes
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:15 pm | |
| I don't see the issue at all, granted I have issues with gender distinction ANYWAY but still... | |
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Empty Observer
Posts : 112 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 28 Location : Turn around.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:50 pm | |
| I doubt it's much of a problem at all, and personally I'm a bit interested to see how this will work out.
EDIT: After reading your blog, I'd like to point out that weird is spelled weird, not wierd. This actually bugged me more than the reveal. | |
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GLaDOS Untainted
Posts : 33 Current Win Points : 53 Join date : 2011-03-29 Age : 31 Location : behind the scenes
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:12 pm | |
| this, incidentally, reminds me I have to work on my blog aahhh | |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:20 pm | |
| - Empty wrote:
- I doubt it's much of a problem at all, and personally I'm a bit interested to see how this will work out.
EDIT: After reading your blog, I'd like to point out that weird is spelled weird, not wierd. This actually bugged me more than the reveal. Some spelling mistakes are on purpose. Makes him seem more like a real person. | |
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AdmirableJellyfish Untainted
Posts : 38 Current Win Points : 17 Join date : 2011-01-30
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:20 pm | |
| There is somehow something awesome about an androgynous slender man or a slender woman. I would go with it. I've learned from Theater that rolling with mistakes tend to make the most memorable moments. And ultimately, write what you want to write. The mythos is far less set in stone than it seems like sometimes. If it makes a good story, you're not doing it wrong. | |
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Laughing Mask Untainted
Posts : 27 Current Win Points : 8 Join date : 2010-12-13 Location : Montana
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| Oh my god. Slenderwoman? That would be awesome.
I vote you just go with it. There could be a number of reasons it appears womanly to your character. Slenderman/woman does play mind tricks. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:59 pm | |
| What happened? Is this the end of this blog? Where has Hallow gone? I want closure on this one...Plus I'm loving the whole Slender Woman idea. Very original, I like it.....Come back Hallow |
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Hallow Sleeper Observer
Posts : 175 Current Win Points : 23 Join date : 2011-03-17 Location : The Hallow Forest.
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:15 pm | |
| I fucked up. I was warned continuously about writing myself into a corner or planning ahead...and I fucked up. So now I'm working on a way to make it not seem completely lame on what I did. My plan is to...Well...That'd ruin it actually. I'll just give you a hint. Repeating number. | |
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The Slender Man Anxious
Posts : 93 Current Win Points : 21 Join date : 2011-03-06
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:17 pm | |
| Haha, well maybe she could be slendys wife? I bet he'd like the company.
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 18, 2011 3:24 pm | |
| - Hallow Sleeper wrote:
- I fucked up.
I was warned continuously about writing myself into a corner or planning ahead...and I fucked up. So now I'm working on a way to make it not seem completely lame on what I did. My plan is to...Well...That'd ruin it actually. I'll just give you a hint. Repeating number. It isn't that bad, in fact it isn't even beyond repair, not that I think it needs repairing...Maybe you should let it fly in what ever direction it is now taking you. You have to survive the outdoor visit...You have, by accident, created a whole new genre within the Slenderman mythos. That to me is a good place to be Plus, give yourself a pat on the back for trying. Be proud and stand up to be counted....It's not any worse than my blog. |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: I may have made an...oopsie. Mon Apr 18, 2011 4:27 pm | |
| To toss in my opinion, you did not fuck anything up at all.
I'm one of those people who accepts and invites new ideas to Slendy, and this is very new and intriguing. So I love and support this. |
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