EaterOfWorlds
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 | Subject: Grey Of Winter Slenderblog  Wed Oct 31, 2012 11:36 am | |
| Hey guys,
I decided to make a Blog on slenderman.
I got a plot written out and my friend is willing to help writing.
So He will make a blog soon and respond too it he is the friend of the protagonist in my series.
So well if you want too check it out here is the link
Grey Of Winter SlenderBlog | |
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sethlapod555
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| | Subject: Re: Grey Of Winter Slenderblog Thu Nov 01, 2012 9:17 am | |
| It's got a pretty good start to it, but it feels kind of bland. It feels like it's missing some backstory to the characters, like explaining the friendship between Connor and John and some details about them. | |
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EaterOfWorlds
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| | Subject: Re: Grey Of Winter Slenderblog Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:38 am | |
| Hi thanks for your reaction I am actually working on Connor will tell more about his friend soon make sure to check out the new post | |
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sethlapod555
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| | Subject: Re: Grey Of Winter Slenderblog Thu Nov 01, 2012 12:05 pm | |
| - EaterOfWorlds wrote:
- Hi thanks for your reaction I am actually working on Connor will tell more about his friend soon make sure to check out the new post
This is some quick plot development. The blood on the mirror part was a bit cliche, but a bit of cliche here and there is okay for a story. My advice is to add some original taste to your story as it goes. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Grey Of Winter Slenderblog Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:43 pm | |
| I started my first slenderblog at around the same time as you did. We even currently have the same number of posts (11). Mine is way different from yours, though. It's less traditional, and my entries are generally longer and more episodic. I like the way that yours is turning out. The shortness of your entries gives it a kind of urgency. It's cool.  | |
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