Your Creepypasta

Did a search and couldn't find this topic. Essentially, share your own original creepypasta.

This guy is mine:

... That's actually really creepy. Now I kinda wanna see that guy in a Slenderman series. Hell yes.

Never made any Creepypasta characters of my own, but I did draw my forum avatar persona once, she's kind of Creepypasta-ish.



Yes I know there's more than three big, long-running, influential vlogs out there. I was tired and it was like 2 AM when I edited this. Which is also why I spelled "Occupation" as "Occipation". XD

Oh lord, you have no feets! D:
Also, Shadows, I've begun seeing your little "Owo" quirk as less of a silly face and more of a verbal tic. Soon I'll have convinced myself that you actually say it out loud in conversation.

And that's a good one, Packfong. Not that forests needed to be made any more creepy..

I wish I had one of my own to share. I have kind of been passively building a creature for... must be months now. Maybe I'll eventually write something featuring it.

Packfong wrote:

Did a search and couldn't find this topic. Essentially, share your own original creepypasta.

This guy is mine:

Wow, that's actually a really good creation. Great job. Just the simple, small backstory that goes with it is creepy all in itself.

@ DarkShadows: You are Lady Deathstrike! : O Nice Slender Man, natch.

@ BravoBismuth: I'm originally from Michigan. The forests are that creepy. : ( We have a Dogman legend about werewolf-type creatures that come out every Halloween. It scared me greatly as a child. He's basically our very own Slender Man. They play this song every October over the radio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5uwFZYCwnS0

@ Sethlapod: They're really more like giant tentacles disguised as legs... >.>

How would you even pronounce "Owo"? Awooh-oh? XD

Okay now whatever I am in that picture is my Creepypasta monster. She is one of a race of monsters that exclusively hunts on online forums. The true name of this species is unpronounceable to the human tongue, so I will call them the Lurkers. They are so called because many of them will lurk forums for a long time to check out the climate before joining up, although not all do. Some are very much hostile towards human forum-goers and some are more friendly, but much of the friendliness is a facade to hide their true nature - creatures that feed upon negative energy from forum-goers. Anything from snarky sarcasm to full-blown flamewars can be enough to feed the Lurker and keep them around. The less-developed of the species are commonly known as "trolls" and tend to instigate argument for the sake of it. They often starve to death as a result of being banned. The more adult members of the species are usually better at hiding themselves and pretending to be human.

Lurkers are known to grow fond of other forum-goers, and will often follow one from the internet into their own computer, where they can observe the actions of their future prey. If your processor has been working hard lately and your CPU usage is up, and you cannot figure out a definitive cause, it's almost certain there's a Lurker hiding in your system at the time - computer processors can have difficulty rendering the code that makes up their bodies, and they can be mistaken for a virus at first glance. Human forum trolls and other humans that tend to stir up trouble and negativity are some of their favorite people to feed upon, and if a target of a Lurker is fed upon for long enough, s/he will first become an empty shell of a human being, devoid of any true emotion... and then, finally, a Lurker themselves. It is possible to befriend a Lurker, although not advised. Lurkers often take the form of their forum avatar, which is possible since they are beings made of code and not true biological creatures, but otherwise they appear as greyish semi-humanoid creatures with abnormally long fingers and long tendril-like appendages for legs.

DarkShadows is a relatively tame member of the species, although she is still susceptible to getting sucked into flamewars and arguments and therefore takes care not to start or get involved with them.

... Yeah I think that was kind of a lame "Creepypasta"... -_-" But I made it up in five minutes so what do you expect?

@ Packfong: You're from Michigan? Dude, I live in Michigan! I vaguely remember the Dogmen, too... And yes, I'll back him up here - we have so many damn forests here. It's literally Slenderman country up here. We get these long, tall, stick-like trees too, they're so damn creepy. And a LOT of pines. My house is in the suburbs and I have at least three or four foresty areas near or bordering my home. So yes, it makes it VERY fun to sit up at night and watch Slenderseries... -_-" And don't get me started on the Upper Peninsula, there's a shitload of pine forests up there and it's even more like a setting for a Slenderseries... definitely very creepy.

Thanks for the compliments on my sketches too, Packfong. XD

I know I just posted one but I've been working on some entries for a tournament and discovered that I have a potential team of pastas. Wondering if anyone would like to see if they're legit creepypasta, before I call them Team Creepypasta or something but don't deliver.

Packfong wrote:

I know I just posted one but I've been working on some entries for a tournament and discovered that I have a potential team of pastas. Wondering if anyone would like to see if they're legit creepypasta, before I call them Team Creepypasta or something but don't deliver.

My God the first one is creepy as hell. The idea of recycling body-parts reminds me of a book I'm reading, Unwind.

Spoiler:

The Yfel is a very tormenting-looking and haunting-looking creature. I like the idea of the dimension-walking. You should carry this story out further.

Mr. Regulus is also a very well-thought-out creation. I like the idea that he is now immortal, and that he can do whatever he wants now. You should also carry this story out, too.

With all of the stories you're writing, you could make a sort of Creepypasta series, in a sense.

Thank you for the kinds words. The book you're talking about sounds interesting! I looked it up on Amazon and the cover is really creepy-looking.

Packfong wrote:

Thank you for the kinds words. The book you're talking about sounds interesting! I looked it up on Amazon and the cover is really creepy-looking.

It really is an astounding book. I'm almost done with it, too. My girlfriend lent it to me a number of months ago, she loans me all of the best books. The guy who wrote Unwind has written several books in the same genre, and in this one he uses multiple-perspective writing.

You should write a story about the recycling body parts thing, it's an interesting and creepy idea, especially the bit where you included the reanimated corpse. (Or at least that's what I thought it was.)

They're cool-looking, creepy-looking, and have interesting backstories.

... I see nothing at all wrong with this. Carry on my wayward son, / There'll be peace when you are done.

sethlapod555 wrote:

You should write a story about the recycling body parts thing, it's an interesting and creepy idea, especially the bit where you included the reanimated corpse. (Or at least that's what I thought it was.)

Essentially, dead corpses are reanimated with synthetics, but also terminally wounded soldiers are "rescued" from death, like this one. As he lost a good chunk of his brain and had to be rebuilt, he doesn't remember his old life in any concrete sense, which is good in the eyes of MAER.

At the moment these characters will be competing in a tournament against other characters, which is the only story so far. I'd love to do more eventually, though 8(.

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They're cool-looking, creepy-looking, and have interesting backstories.

Thank-you. I'm glad because I've a habit for bad creepypasta, and I have the negative reviews/points to show for it!

I can't stop.

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If anyone has any, I'd love to read them...

EDIT: Also, I'm sorry, I didn't realize I'd just double-posted. O.o