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|Subject: Thing for Five Two Three: CMYK, a Proxy group Wed Mar 27, 2013 6:01 pm|| |
Hey, guys. I have an idea I'd like you to take a look at and give your input on!
In my current series Five Two Three, I'm exploring the concept of a group of proxies working together as a team with the goal of breaking their targets' will and rendering them vulnerable to mental takeover and/or extraction of information (possibly information related to The Ark/an Ark?).
The unit is arranged as such:
What do you think is good, what do you think needs a change, and what do you think could be added or taken out?
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|Subject: Re: Thing for Five Two Three: CMYK, a Proxy group Sat Apr 13, 2013 2:32 pm|| |
In my own opinion that's absolutely amazing! How you came up with this is just incredible. I wouldn't change anything it's honestly great. I need to come up with some proxies for my series that's in development right now.